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Describing Objects, Animals, and People

Use the new adjectives from this lesson to describe the activities of six objects, animals, and people. EX. The old, heavy elephant is sitting in a clean, quiet place.

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The dog is sitting on the grass. The people are sitting on the bus. Five thieves are persecuting two old men. This place is safe and clean. Those boxes are very heavy. That girl has carried a heavy boxes.

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Submitted: 2008-08-23 02:52:24

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2008-08-23 02:58:33
JamesStrong

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Excellent, Jennifer! Again, you´ve done a great job. I did not find any mistake. You are already a teacher! :=) James

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2008-08-23 11:32:12
Vimiew

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fantastic ! The only thing I see you need to correct is the last sentence. boxes is plural, but the rest of the sentence is singular. So you could do either, "That girl carried (some, several, a couple of, etc, or you can leave this word out completely) heavy boxes." or "That girl carried a heavy box." I hope that this helps. Great job !

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2008-08-24 00:23:55
Jexuz

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Very good work, the correction is above.

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