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What are people doing?

Using the vocabulary from this lesson, describe the new activities that six people are doing: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The postman is often pushing a cart in the morning.

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Amin
1- A woman is looking after her new baby. 2- A man is driving his new car. 3- A boy is studying hard for final exams. 4- A girl is often waking up late on the weekend. 5- You are going to be famous in future. 6- I am doing this some English exercises right now.
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Submitted: 2008-08-27 08:42:41



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  • 2008-08-27 09:50:06
    Derek
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    4. ... waking up late AT the weekend.
    6. Omit the word 'this'.
    Excellent submission.
    Keep it up!
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  • 2008-08-27 10:28:33
    Veronica
    Very good!
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  • 2008-08-27 14:32:12
    Tatiana
    As far as I know, they say "at the weekend" in Britain and "on the weekend" in the USA.
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  • 2008-08-27 15:18:45
    footballmania
    5- you are going to be famous in the future.
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  • 2008-08-28 23:57:05
    Mitchell Lawren...
    I see a get improvement from your previous posts.
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  • 2008-08-28 23:57:42
    Mitchell Lawren...
    Sorry,
    I see a great improvement from your previous posts.  Well done.
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  • 2008-08-30 22:22:13
    Isabel Theresa
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    Hi my friend Amin!
    1- A woman is looking after her new baby. 2- A man is driving his new car. 3- A boy is studying hard for his final exams. 4- A girl is often waking up late on the weekends. 5- You are going to be famous in the future. 6- I am doing some English exercises right now.
    Congratulations! Keep working!
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