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What are you doing this week?
What are you doing this week? What activities are you doing? When? Which days will be the busiest?
Author:
inci
inci
TODAY İS FRİDAY BUSİEST DAY FOR ME .SO I ONLY WORK İN TODAY . I DONT ANY ACTİVİTE BECAUSE TODAY NİGHT I WİLL TO TİRED . BUT TOMORROW MORNİNG MY FRİENDS AND I GOİNG TO GO TO POOL MAYBE WE CAN GO TO CAFE NİGHT .I HAVE TO CLEAN MY ROOM SUNDAY . I WİLL SPEAND WİTH CLEAN ALL SUNDAY . I WİLL BUSİEST TUESDAY, THURSDAY, SATURDAY NEXT WEEK.I WILL START STEP-AEROBİK . I NEED LOST KİLO SOON
Submitted: 2008-08-29 08:22:17
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You need to learn prepositions...
Keep it up...
Today is Friday and the busiest day for me. I only work today. I don't do any other activities after work because tonight I will be tired. But, tomorrow morning, my friends and I will be going to the pool; and maybe we will go to the cafe in the night. I have to clean my room on Sunday. I will spend all day cleaning on Sunday. Next week I will be busiest on Tuesday, Thrusday and Saturday. I will be starting step- aerobics. I need to lose some kilos soon.
I agree with Lorraine`s comments.
One more thing...
You should not type everything in capital letters.
Only the first letter of each sentence needs to be a capital. It does not matter with speaking but it is important in writing. With writing, capital letters means you are SHOUTING:)
JP
The English alphabet does not have the letter "İ".
Lorraine has good advice for you, İnci.