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Describing the weather
Describe the weather for five days, and explain what different people need for that weather. Ex. Today it is raining, and it is cold. The woman needs a raincoat and an umbrella.
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Judy
Judy
Today is hot, the man is wearing sunglasses and a woman have an umbrellar ... They wear very less clothes.
Submitted: 2008-08-31 10:33:23
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2008-09-07 20:52:22stehallAverage rating:
You started very well but at the end made a few mistakes. But overall it was good. Kepp up the good work!Rate This Review
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