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Running Errands

Write about a set of errands you have to do. Where do you need to go? When? With who?

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I don't often make the commissons because it is my wife who is going to look for them.But from time to time I must be going to buy to eat then I go in a grocery store.If I must buy me a costume I go to a merchant of vétement.Bread me the achéte to the bakery.

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Submitted: 2008-09-01 11:31:43

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2008-09-02 20:09:30
hassan

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I don't often make the commissions of …………. because my wife who is usually goes to look for them. If I want to buy a costume I go to clothes shops, also from time to time I go to grocery to buy food, And the bread from the bakery.

Your are using some French words as I see.
Any way the subject is understood.
Good luck.

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2008-09-03 00:41:57
Jay

I don't often run errands because my wife does this for us. When I do go shopping I go to the supermarket. If I must buy clothes, I go to the clothing store. I buy bread at the bakery.

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2008-09-03 03:39:52
kotto2001

good comments by Jay here

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2008-09-14 21:22:34
MiraJ

I don't often run errands because my wife does them. But from time to time I need to buy something to eat so I go to a grocery store. If I have to buy a suit (clothes) I go to a clothing store. I buy bread at the bakery.

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