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Pretend you are giving directions to a friend. Tell your friend how to get to your house from his or her house.

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Danila
It is easy to get to my place and your house isn't too far. Go to main road and at the traffic light turn left on to Bridge Street. At the petrol station take a right and follow the signals to the bridge. Just before the pub that you will see on the right there is a tiny white cottage called "Lavender". Push the gate and pop in. I will be there.
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Submitted: 2008-09-15 14:02:46



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  • 2008-09-15 14:27:24
    yukodama
    sorry, I don't deserve to your teacher. My English is still middle level, not high. But , with this explanation, I think as if I could go to your house so easily, ahaha. Thanks anyway.
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  • 2008-09-15 16:01:13
    miracle_smith
    Hello, my friend. YOu did an excellent job! Your written English is great. Hope the comments below, which are capitalized are helpful to you. It is easy to get to my place BECAUSE your house isn't too far. Go to THE main road. (NEW SENTENCE) At the traffic light turn left ONTO Bridge Street. At the GAS station take a right and follow the signals to the bridge. Just before the pub that you will see on the right, (COMMA) there is a tiny white cottage called "LAVENDER." Push the gate and pop in. I will be there.
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  • 2008-09-15 22:07:06
    purplecrazy
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    Really good! There aren't many mistakes, so this is how I would write it: "It is easy to get to my place since your house isn't too far. Go to the main road and at the traffic light, turn left onto Bridge Street. At the gas station take a right and follow the signs to the bridge. Just before the pub that you will see on the right, there is a tiny white cottage called "Lavender." Push the gate open and pop in. I will be there."
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