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Need and Want

My wife wants a big family. She has two sisters, eight aunts and uncles, and twenty-seven cousins. My wife wants between four and six children. We have two children now. We will need a bigger house for six children. We will also need more money, more food, and more clothes. I want a new television and a new red sports car, but my wife says I dont need them.

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Eman
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Submitted: 2007-10-19 19:22:30



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  • 2007-11-05 14:31:58
    Zarig
    Try to avoid rolling your R/r's, keeping the tongue on the floor of the mouth. In English, the R/r is never rolled. Also, one must pause after a comma and stop after a period (full stop). Your diction (spoken clarity/choice of words) is very good, otherwise.
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  • 2007-11-30 00:08:13
    Zarig
    Practice makes perfect!
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