English Writing Exercise

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 5

Describe Your Home Tools

List some tools that you have at home. What are they? Where did you buy them? How often do you use them? What was the last tool you used and why?


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Today it's October, 17th. It's a Friday. The weather has been sunny all day, but ist was cold. Always less than 15 °C. It hasn't been raining like it was the last days but autumn has finally arrived. The weather report says tomorrow will be equal but a little colder and more cloudy. I don't really care because I have to work indoors anyway.
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    October, 17th (no comma needed, for American style, you can also omit "th") It's a Friday ► It's Friday (no article for saying what day-of-week it is) ist was cold ► it was cold (you let a German word slipped in) Always less than 15 °C. (not a proper sentence on its own. Best combined with the previous sentence, linked with a comma) the last days ► the last few days ("the last days" connotes the "final days", not exactly what you meant. The word "few" is required here) will be equal ► will be the same ("equal" is used when comparing quantities/levels. e.g. the gain equals the loss. You could also reword your sentence to: will be equally cold...) Excellent work! What you wrote is nearly perfect. I provide suggestions here so you can improve.
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