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Pretend you are giving directions to a friend. Tell your friend how to get to your house from his or her house.

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khashayar
Go straight then at the first signal go to the left . Go two blocks and turn right . Here is my home.
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Submitted: 2007-11-30 22:32:29



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  • Chynna - 2007-12-01 00:30:09
    Very good! You are able to meet practical writing needs and to express familiar meanings clearly. You can create simple sentences on familiar topics. Your writing is concise, fluent and comprehensible. I have a few changes for you in the following. "Go straight, then at the first signal turn the left . Go two blocks and turn right. There is my home." You may continue to practice on the verbs. Thank you so much for the great work. Please keep it up. Best wishes to you!
     
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  • Carl Nulsen - 2007-12-05 00:35:07
    Nice.  Very clear and concise.  You may omit the "to the".  "at the first signal go left". 
    Perhaps more description of where your house is located.  "Go two blocks and turn right.  My house is the third one on the right".  Something like that.  Great job.
     
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  • pedant - 2007-12-28 20:07:32
    There is my home.
     
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