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What time is it now? What time was it fifteen minutes ago? What time was it thirty minutes ago?

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khashayar
It is 6:50 pm now . It was 6:35 pm in fifteen minutes ago . It was 6:20 pm in thirty minutes ago .
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Submitted: 2007-11-30 23:51:49



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  • zappaesque - 2007-12-04 14:54:18
    "It is 6:50pm now.  It was 6:35pm fifteen minutes ago.  It was 6:20pm thirty minutes ago."  Very nice job! Only very minor mistakes.
     

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