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We are a big family. I have two brothers and two sisters.They are older than me .

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Submitted: 2007-12-01 01:42:58

Chynna - 2007-12-01 02:11:27
Very good! You are able to meet practical writing needs and to express familiar meanings clearly. You can create simple sentences on familiar topics. Your writing is concise, fluent and comprehensible. I have a few changes for you in the following."I have a big family. I have two brothers and two sisters. They are older than I ." You may continue to practice on verbs, spelling, punctuation and capitalization. Thank you so much for the great work. Please keep it up. Best wishes to you!

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dan in nyc - 2007-12-01 04:46:01
"They are older than I" is technically grammatically correct, but most American speakers would say either "They are older than me" or "They are older than I am".

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