English Writing Exercise

Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 5

How many objects?

Write about a number of different objects. Which people have which object? How many of each do different people have? EX. The girl has twenty-five flowers and seven candles.


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The girl has seventy t-shirts and forty jeans in her closet. The teacher has fifty four pens and one hundred pencils. I have two chinchillas and seven goldfishes. You have three cars and one bicycle. He has fifty four dollars and seventeen cents in his wallet.
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  • wingless
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    Perfecto! La muchacha tiene mucha ropa. ;-)
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  • giordano
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    fifty-four very good!
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  • Hendryp
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    excellent seven goldfish well done
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  • cuppachino ɐddn...
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    forty pairs of jeans jeans must be refered to as pairs nearly perfect. Well done!
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  • cuppachino ɐddn...
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    An obscure fact: the plural form of "fish" is also "fish" not "fishes" "fishes" as a word does exist. But it has a different meaning. It's used in the context of describing many different species of fishes. Of course, it's also the third person singular present tense of the verb "fish" as in "He fishes the coin out of the tank." So Hendryp is correct in pointing out that error.
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