English Writing Exercise
Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 5
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My last vacation that I have spent 2 days in Jiuzaigou, located in Sichun Province, in the southwest of China. It is an extraordinary place where has no pollution and the nature is super fantastic , like a paradis . You can take photographes with the colorful tree leaves , green, yellow, red, orange... the water is always in blue, so clear that you can see the bottom of the lakes. I will go and visit this wonderful place again next time.
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On my last vacation I spent two days in Jiuzaigou...
It is an extraordinary place that has no pollution (OR where there is no pollution) and nature is super-fantastic, like a paradise. You can take photographs of the colorful tree leaves
The water is always blue
On my last vacation that I have spent 2 days in Jiuzaigou, located in Sichun Province, in the southwest of China. It is an extraordinary place where has there is no pollution and the nature is super fantastic , like a paradise . You can take photographes with of the colorful tree leaves in, green, yellow, red, and orange... the water is always in blue. It's so clear that you can see the bottom of the lakes. I will go back and visit this wonderful place again next time.
NOTES: ► take photos with a camera, of the scenary... ► someone is dressed in blue, an object is blue
When making a list: one, two, three and four.
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