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Describing the weather

Describe the weather for five days, and explain what different people need for that weather. Ex. Today it is raining, and it is cold. The woman needs a raincoat and an umbrella.

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João Paulo P. Bispo
My bed is big.
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Submitted: 2007-12-03 19:31:18



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  • McArthur
    Speaks:  English (Native)
    Good, but very short.
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    2007-12-03 19:32:44 Report abuse
  • michael st.john...
    Speaks:  English (Beginner)
    Hey, give me a break!  You need more content!!!
    My bed is big, green, heavy as hell, and 2 meters high!
    Best wishes, Michael
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    2008-01-06 20:36:29 Report abuse

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