English Writing Exercise

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 1

Describing People

Describe six different people, using two descriptive words each: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young. The boy is tall.


Maxim's submission: Average Rating:
The women is shy and gently
The man is strong and brave
The boy is smart and bore
The girl is noisy and gay
You are an attention and clever
I`m a tall and sunburned
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  • cuppachino ɐddn...
    Mochapoints: 15192  |  Teacher Score: 8602 (100%)

    The women is shy and gentle.     The man is strong and brave.   The boy is smart and boring.  The girl is noisy and gay happy.  You are an attention attractive??? and clever.   I`m a tall and sunburned tanned. 

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  • B
    Mochapoints: 25564  |  Teacher Score: 3276 (100%)

    The women is shy and gently gentle. The man is strong and brave. The boy is smart and bore bored. The girl is noisy and gay (if you are thinking of the emotion, maybe you meant "happy"). You are an attention attentive/attractive and clever. I`m a tall and sunburned.
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  • Luiza Teixeira
    Mochapoints: 1577  |  Teacher Score: 181 (0%)

    The women is shy and GENTLE

    The boy is smart and BORED (OR BORING)

    You are ATTENTIVE and clever
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