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How many objects?

Write about a number of different objects. Which people have which object? How many of each do different people have? EX. The girl has twenty-five flowers and seven candles.

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I have many things in front to me, for example: a monitor, a cup, two speakers and a board. Behind to me I can see a pillow, a picture, a lamp and a alarm clock. I have too a lot of pieces of paper about infotmation of different things but more that all the picture of my wife.

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Submitted: 2008-05-25 08:50:50

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Luis Alberto - 2008-03-16 00:56:03
Hello my friend, excuse me for these coments; I am not sure about my comments, but it is only an exercise for learning english together; I think that you write "I wishes", but must be "I wish" because is the first person: I don't use the word "Idiom"; I use "langauge". I don't say "Today it is Satusrday"; I say "today is Saturday"; I don't say "At the nine o clock begin the soccer game", but "at nine o clock begins(third person) the soccer game

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