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  CiscoRucinski - 2007-12-23 03:43:15

  The first thing that comes to mind, is 'chicken rice shop' the name of the shop? if it is then it should be capitalized, but if it is shop that is called 'Chicken Rice,' then the word 'shop' does not have to be capitalized.
  
  I would combine the last two sentences.  "There is a toy shop across the street, and a burger shop next door." What you have is correct, and the English language supports it, but like I said to a few people, combining sentences together adds that extra 'spice' to your writing. In the last sentence, the word 'the' should not be included, I do not know how else to say it, as in why, but it is grammatically incorrect.
  
  Otherwise, good job.

   

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