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礼尚往来

Describe a present you have received. What was it? Who did you get it from? Is there something you gave in return?

我走动在火鸡 他们命名是 ~~ 伊斯坦布尔 , 伊兹密尔 , 安卡拉 等等 ^_^ 我想要参观 ; 韩国, 中国, 日本, 并且越南 ^_^
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Submitted: 2008-03-27 23:58:01



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  • 2008-03-28 00:59:04
    sliver
    oh,no, i can't understand what you have said!
    but the following sentence must be you just wanted to say.
    我想去国外旅行,我想去伊斯坦布尔 , 伊兹密尔 , 安卡拉,还有韩国,中国,日本,和越南旅行。
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  • 2008-03-28 01:30:44
    fiona
    you need more work, come on!
    you will make it
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  • 2008-03-28 01:31:42
    Chynna
    我在土耳其。我去过伊斯坦布尔 , 伊兹密尔 , 安卡拉 等等 ^_^ 我想要参观 ; 韩国, 中国, 日本,  并且越南  ^_^ 
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  • 2008-03-28 01:36:20
    Chynna
    Great efforts!!!! Congratulations! You develop the topic vividly in Chinese characters. Your writing is concise, fluent, beautiful,  and comprehensible. When you use machine translators, you may re-verify it by translating back to your language. I just correct the machine translation mistakes for you. You may also get benefits from other helpful comments. Thank you so much for the great work. Please keep it up and move forward with your friend team!!! 

    非常好! 您的文字简明,流利,容易理解, 漂亮。为了尽量保留其创作价值,我修改了一点。您也可以从其他的评论中获益。非常感谢您! 希望您能同您的朋友团队一道继续前进!
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  • 2008-03-28 02:36:11
    haifeiye
    sorry,l just can't understand you ,you mean ,我去过很多地方他们的名字是伊斯坦布尔 , 伊兹密尔 , 安卡拉 等等 , 我还想去韩国, 中国, 日本以及越南 ,是吗?



    you are inteligent ,and you are doing well ,even though you make mistakes sometimes ,that's because chinese is very difficult for a freigner. so you are terrific.
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  • 2008-03-28 02:36:13
    haifeiye
    sorry,l just can't understand you ,you mean ,我去过很多地方他们的名字是伊斯坦布尔 , 伊兹密尔 , 安卡拉 等等 , 我还想去韩国, 中国, 日本以及越南 ,是吗?



    you are inteligent ,and you are doing well ,even though you make mistakes sometimes ,that's because chinese is very difficult for a freigner. so you are terrific.
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  • 2008-03-28 02:36:22
    haifeiye
    sorry,l just can't understand you ,you mean ,我去过很多地方他们的名字是伊斯坦布尔 , 伊兹密尔 , 安卡拉 等等 , 我还想去韩国, 中国, 日本以及越南 ,是吗?



    you are inteligent ,and you are doing well ,even though you make mistakes sometimes ,that's because chinese is very difficult for a freigner. so you are terrific.
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  • 2008-03-28 03:06:10
    Awen
    I do not understand what you have written. So here is something everybody can understand.

    我很喜欢章子怡。
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  • 2008-03-29 02:28:09
    serena
    Come on!
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  • 2008-03-31 15:31:23
    Julia
    Oh,what did you want to say?Sorry,I can't understand.Come on!
    我住在土耳其,我去过伊斯坦布尔 , 伊兹密尔 , 安卡拉 等等,我还想去韩国, 中国, 日本,  和越南。
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  • 2008-04-12 02:15:13
    米雨
    the first sentence i can't understand
    我去过伊斯坦布尔 , 伊兹密尔 , 安卡拉 等国家,我想去韩国, 中国, 日本,  以及越南参观
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  • 2008-05-18 15:43:04
    vanilla
    我去过很多地方 它们的名字是
    伊斯坦布尔 , 伊兹密尔 , 安卡拉 等等 ^_^ 我还想参观 ;
    韩国, 中国, 日本,  和越南  ^_^  It's a good aidea. Can I go to those places with you ? hehe~~I live in China.I'm a good tourism guide if you come China. Welcome!
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  • 2008-05-20 21:23:11
    LOST GHOST
    Very nice but you're trying better ^^ NEXT TIME ~ GOOD LUCKY ~ ~_~
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  • 2008-09-02 09:20:11
    boaKwon
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    you have Turkey?
    haha
    don't use online transator!
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