French Writing Exercise

Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 1

Describe the location of your city and country

Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe the locations of your city and country. Which countries are located north, south, east, and west of your country? In which corner of the country is your city located? Describe which cities are located north, south, east, or west of your city.


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Bonjour! Je m'appelle Destiny et j'ai dix-sept ans. J'étude le français parce que c'est beau et je veux voyager le monde et une jour habiter en France. Je suis Américaine.
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  • nani26
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    Je m'appelle Destiny et j'apprends le français parce que j'adore la langue et je crois  que c'est trés beau et exotique. Je veux habiter en France un jour et voyager partout dans le monde et il y a beaucoup de pays qui  parlent le français. Je suis au  Etats-Unis et je ne l'aime pas  beaucoup.

    Trés bien
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  • kafka
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    regarde les corrections de nani,

    bon travail et bon courage
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  • cuppachino ɐddn...
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    First, this is what I think you intend to say:

    ►My name is Destiny. I learn French because I love the language and I think it is very beautiful and exotic. I want to live in France one day, and travel to many French-speaking countries. I am currently in the United States but I don't like it that much. (I don't think you really meant to say "Je suis le Etats-Unis..." in the sense of "L'État, c'est moi" comme Louis XIV)

    Here is the version I propose:

    ►Je m'appelle Destiny et j'apprends le français parce que j'adore la langue et je crois c'est très beau et exotique. Je veux habiter en France un jour et à Voyage de nombreux pays francophones. Je suis aux États-Unis mais je ne l'aime pas que beaucoup.

    ►You spelled "très" with accent aigu instead of accent grave, as it should be. "not that much" would have to simply translate into "not very much" sans le mot "que".
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  • lostisland
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    Nice job. Good luck.
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  • Ed
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    Bonjour! Je m'appelle Destiny et j'ai dix-sept ans. J'étudie le français parce que c'est beau et je veux voyager à travers le monde et une jour habiter en France. Je suis Américaine.

     

    ;o)
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