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At the park.

Describe what you do at the park. Do you play sports? Do you read?

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Sifus
On the park i take a walk together with my dog, or i will play some football with my friends. And on summer day we will also grill there.
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Submitted: 2008-04-06 13:20:17



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  • 2008-04-06 13:32:48
    Lillian
    Well done but only few mistake on grammar.
    It should be "At the park I take the dog for a walk,or I play football with my friends.And on summer days we also grill there."
    Keep going on!
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