English Writing Exercise
Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 5
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I am working in shifts, so I wake up in different time. But every morning i start with shower, then i have brakfast and go at work, or university if i have lessons in this day. I go to work with my car, it take about 15 minutes, at work i take my shift from previous operator, turn on my computer and now I can go drink coffee, 10 minutes at kitchen and i can start my day.
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I work in shifts, so I wake up at different times. Every morning I start with a shower. Then I have breakfast and go to work, or to university if I have lessons that day. I go to work in my car. It takes about 15 minutes. At work I take my shift from the previous operator, turn on my computer, and now I can go to the kitchen for 10 minutes to drink my coffee. Then I can start my day.
[Do not start sentences with "but." Good job- very detailed! Just keep practicing.]
I am working in shifts, so I wake up in at different times. But However, every "morning" i start with shower, then i have breakfast and go at work, or university if i have lessons in this that day. I go to work with in my car. It take about 15 minutes. At work I take my shift from the previous operator, turn on my computer, and now I can go drink coffee for 10 minutes at the galley kitchen and now I can start my day.
Your learning level isn't "beginner" as stated in your profile. You are generally competent with grammar and have a very healthy vocabulary. You're either a very high Intermediate, or low Advanced learner. I took the liberty to grade it as such. If I were to treat you as beginner, then this would be beyond "perfect" with nothing else to say.
►Putting quotation marks around the word "morning" indicates you only mean your so-called morning, which is not necessarily a "real" morning, depending on your shift that day.
►The first person pronoun: I, must be capitalized, even when it appears in the middle of a sentence.
Your work is consistently thorough, tidy, and creative (with interesting twists). Very diligent efforts! A pleasure to correct.
BRAVO!
2 additional mistakes I have missed in previous comment:
I have breakfast and go to at work
thats good i agree with other comments , nothing more to say.
well done
I am working in shifts, so I wake up in different time. But every morning I start with a shower, then I have breakfast and go to work, or university if I have lessons on this day. I go to work by my car, it takes about 15 minutes, at work I take my shift from the previous operator, turn on my computer and now I can go drink coffee, 10 minutes in the kitchen and I can start my day.
I am working in shifts, so I wake up in at different times. But Every morning I start with a shower and , then i have breakfast. and Then I go at to work, or to the University if I have lessons in this that day. I drive go to work with in my car, it which takes about 15 minutes,. at work I replace the take my shift from previous operator, turn on my computer and then now I can go to the kitchen for 10 minutes to drink coffee, 10 minutes at kitchen and before I can start my day.
Very nice work overall. Grammar on more complex sentences takes some practice.
Steve