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What are people doing?

Using the vocabulary from this lesson, describe the new activities that six people are doing: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The postman is often pushing a cart in the morning.

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my hometown is a big city,the view is picturesque and has many buildings.

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Submitted: 2008-04-11 12:16:37

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jackweil - 2008-04-12 09:47:02
i think that maybe you could say like this my hometown look likes a big city ,they are very beautiful ,have many buildings, worth see it .

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wiscoxgd - 2008-04-24 10:56:36
Before "has" there is no subject.Change "has" to "there are". Maybe "scenary" is much better than"view".

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