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Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 3

Describing Objects

Instructions: Using one positive and one negative statement, describe six objects (a car, a flower, a coin, a tree, a house, a purse). Ex. The house is black. It is not white.

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wo da lou shi ai se de. ta nian ji da. zhe zou da lou shi zong se de. zhe shou meng shi bai se da. ta bu shi hua, ta bu shi shu.
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  • gaofeng
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    I dont understand you writen it
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  • hanya
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    Don't give it up .
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  • h2o1
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  • Lily
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  • sandy109
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  • wo
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    my house is a old,i am white, black,no.
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  • Lily
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    wo de lou shi an se de. ta shi xin de zhe zuo da lou shi zong se de .zhe ge men shi bai se de ta mei you hua ye mei you shu
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  • demi
    Mochapoints: 795  |  Teacher Score: 34 (0%)
    按您的话,我再写成汉语和拼音: 我 的 大 楼 是 暗 色 的 。它 是 旧 的 。 wo de da lou shi an se de . ta shi jiu de . 这 座 大 楼 是 棕 色 的 。 zhe zuo da lou shi zong se de . 这 所 门 是 白 色 的。 zhe suo men shi bai se de . 它 不 是 花 也 不 是 树 。 ta bu shi hua ye bu shi shu .
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  • AzureWolf
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    Thank you so much, flowva and demi!
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  • 夕阳美/April
    Mochapoints: 34964  |  Teacher Score: 20419 (100%)
    Good! I think it's not easy for you to write so much.I must learn from you .I'll try my best to learn English.Now I rewrite the article for you. wo de lou shi sha se de, bu ji de le. zhe zuo da lou shi zong se de.ta de qian men shi bai se de.mei you ting yuan, mei you shu ,ye mei you hua.
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  • Chynna
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    wo da lou shi ai se de. ta hen jiu. zhe zou da lou shi zong se de. zhe shan men shi bai se da. ta bu shi hua, ta bu shi shu.
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  • Chynna
    Mochapoints: 107217  |  Teacher Score: 103536
    Great job!!! Congratulations! You are able to use Chinese pinyin to express familiar meanings. Your writing is concise, clear, fluent, beautiful, perfect and comprehensible. I just have a minor change for you in pinyin. You are so good at pinyin that you may try to type pinyin to get Chinese characters. Thank you so much for the great work. Please keep it up. Best wishes to you! 非常好! 您能用拼音清楚地表达熟悉的意思。您能在熟悉的题目下创造中文句子。您的句子简明, 流利,是可理解的。我为您做了一点修改。您可以试一试打拼音得到中文字。非常感谢您。继续努力!我为您祝福!
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  • pengshuxin
    Mochapoints: 968  |  Teacher Score: 241 (0%)
    according to your meaning:my storied building is dark,it is old.It's color is brown.This door is white,it isn't flower or tree. yes or no? my understand:The storied building I lived in is old,it's color is brown.it's front door is white.There is no yard in front of it ,neither flower or tree. translate into pinyin: wo zhu de da lou shi jiu de,ta shi zhong se de.ta de qian men shi bai se de,ta de qian mian mei you yuan zi .ye mei you hua he shu. As a beginner your work is good.I think continue to study you definitely do a wonderful work.
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