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Describe (with positive and negative attributes) the objects you learned about in this lesson. Ex. These flowers are not red. They are blue.

我有一宠物。我的宠物是猫.Princess是女猫.
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Submitted: 2008-04-11 21:14:25



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  • 2008-04-12 01:01:06
    butterflydb
    you shuould say that ,一只猫,or 一条猫。母猫,not 女猫,but I think your chinese is goog too.cheer up!
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  • 2008-04-12 01:19:55
    lucy
    you did very well.
    我有一只宠物。
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  • 2008-04-12 01:20:22
    Charley Garrett
    谢谢。
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  • 2008-04-12 01:43:00
    Chynna
    我有一只宠物。我的宠物是猫. Princess是母猫.
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  • 2008-04-12 01:45:45
    Chynna
    Congratulations! You did a very good job as a beginner!
    1.This topic is based on the vocabulary and sentence patterns in Unit 1-4 and 5 about adj. and measure words.
    2. You use them to write about the topic in Chinese Pinyin.
    3. Your writing is concise, fluent, and comprehensible except for the typos.
    4. You use "有“ very well.
    Thank you so much for the great work. Please keep it up.  Best wishes to you! 非常好! 您能用汉语拼音清楚地表达熟悉的意思。您能在熟悉的题目下用课内的知识,创造中文句子。您使用的课文的句型和词汇很正确。我只作了一点修改。在课内知识基 础上,您可以学习其他的中文表达法,丰富您的汉语知识。非常感谢您。继续努力!我为您祝福!
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  • 2008-04-12 01:46:32
    笨笨猪妖
    错了,一个地方,"Princess是女猫"应是"Princess是母猫"
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  • 2008-04-12 01:59:30
    ygll
    good!
    有些地方还需改进,如 我的宠物是一只猫。
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  • 2008-04-12 02:23:32
    coracai0730
    我有一只宠物,她是一只公主猫
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  • 2008-04-12 02:37:16
    林雪
    You done a good exercise, hope that the efforts, I believe you soon  be able to use Chinese exchange with us. Ha ha. . 真的做得很好哦,不过我们一般不说“女猫”,而说“母猫”。希望你能更上一层楼。I hope you scale new heights。
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  • 2008-04-12 03:12:04
    caoqin04
    应该是母猫,不应该是女猫。
    中文中标点符号与英文不一样。用“。”,不用“.”。
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  • 2008-04-12 03:15:05
    caoqin04
    把“.”改为“。”
    应该是母猫。
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  • 2008-04-12 03:31:12
    lynn
    Princess是母猫.
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  • 2008-04-12 03:44:38
    little godfish
    一个宠物;女猫改为母猫;Princess是公主
    我有个宠物,是母猫,名字叫公主
    我有个宠物,名字叫公主的猫。
    我的宠物是猫,名字叫公主!
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  • 2008-04-12 04:16:06
    hijack
    I can understand your mean. Here is my suggestion:
    我有ㄧ隻寵物,我的寵物是一隻貓.她是ㄧ隻叫Princess的母貓.
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  • 2008-04-12 04:16:21
    malishi
    很好,继续努力。
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  • 2008-04-12 05:04:38
    Jospikin
    很好, 前面应该是  (我有一只宠物)                       
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  • 2008-04-12 05:08:06
    tanlihua
    少了了词,"一只"宠物
    such as the different of"one piece of paper" and "one paper"
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  • 2008-04-12 05:33:35
    cecilia
    应该是:我有一只宠物。Princess是雌猫。
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  • 2008-04-12 06:12:21
    JOY
    我有一只宠物,我的宠物是一只猫,Princess是女猫.
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  • 2008-04-12 06:28:22
    Rose
    我有一宠物,我的宠物是猫,它是只母猫;
    中国人讲动物讲的是公母,而女指的是人类,人类才会用男女来形容.
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  • 2008-04-12 07:42:31
    LSN
    Princess是母猫。
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  • 2008-04-12 07:58:00
    jane
    不错啊!不过我决得说是一只母猫会不会好一点呢??
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  • 2008-04-12 07:58:24
    gloria826
    你有多少只猫呢?
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  • 2008-04-12 08:05:41
    Louisa
    我有“一个”宠物;  应该是“母猫”不是“女猫”
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  • 2008-04-12 08:09:55
    Louisa
    应该是“一个”; 应该写“母猫”不是“女猫”
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  • 2008-04-12 08:49:25
    shaolin
    Princess是母猫
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  • 2008-04-12 09:14:36
    dong ke
    我有一个宠物,它是猫.Princess是个母猫.
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  • 2008-04-12 10:01:06
    shmily
    你可以这么说:我有一只宠物,我的宠物是猫,它是波斯猫。
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  • 2008-04-12 10:26:23
    大姐
    女猫. 应该为母猫.
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  • 2008-04-12 10:35:31
    scorpio
    我有宠物。我的宠物是猫,她的名字叫Princess,是只雌猫
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  • 2008-04-12 11:12:22
    Jesseca
    i have a pet ,it is a cat ,and her name is princess
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  • 2008-04-12 11:17:49
    sprine
    very good! I know your meaning.
    You can express like:我有一只宠物猫princess.它是只母猫。

    中文对动物分性别时用 公母 或 雌雄

    有时间也检查一下我的作业,谢谢!
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  • 2008-04-12 11:32:38
    我是卖白菜的
    very well ^_^

    use "。" don't use "."
    don't speak “女猫” say“母猫”
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  • 2008-04-12 11:36:06
    wuyiting
    you can say 我有一只宠物,它是猫。它是雌性的。
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  • 2008-04-12 11:42:38
    ianzhu
    Princess是一只母猫。
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  • 2008-04-12 11:48:02
    joyce1985
    哈哈。写的不错呀,我看见大家给你的评语,正是我想表达的,因此我就不再重复啦。
    加油!取得更大的进步。
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  • 2008-04-12 12:50:22
    roselia
    Hi Charley,
    We always say 母 or 雌 instead of 女 to describe female animals in chinease.
    If you have any questions please feel free to contect me in e-mail.
    My e-mail address is lixwmaster@126.com
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  • 2008-04-12 13:01:40
    ritazlp
    加油
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  • 2008-04-12 13:19:25
    wangqimars
    I have A pet=我有一只宠物
    My pet is a cat=我的宠物是只猫
    Princess is a famale cat=Princess是只母猫
    (only when we refer to an animal,especially cute pets or some pup we like,we use"女",generally the word for animal is "母")
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  • 2008-04-12 13:28:33
    wangqimars
    BTW,what a noble cat you have,at least the name
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  • 2008-04-12 13:41:35
    healy
    你的中文很好!有空可以可能教我英语吗?我教你中文。晚上时我们可以语音练习
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  • 2008-04-12 13:57:23
    草叶有舞
    我有一只宠物。我的宠物是猫.Princess是母猫.
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  • 2008-04-12 13:58:08
    mmyfl
    很好呀.不过通常不会说是"女猫"而是说"母猫".不过这不重要,重要的是你很好的表达了自己的意思.而且看得出来你是把你的猫当作人来看待的,从这一点来说你没错,而是我们两国文化的差异.
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  • 2008-04-12 13:59:27
    Mandy
    Princess是女猫.
            NOT "女猫"but "母猫 "  OR  " 雌猫"
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  • 2008-04-12 14:10:31
    yppleland
    很好
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  • 2008-04-12 15:01:21
    Terry_Ko
    I have a suggestion about your sentence :
    “我有一只名字叫做Princess的雌性宠物猫。
    In chinese we usually say "雌性" for  the female animal .
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  • 2008-04-12 15:15:50
    daniel
    一只猫
    一是数字词,后面要加量词。
    只有在古文中才会省略量词
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  • 2008-04-12 15:21:25
    This
    您有多少只宠物?
    It's means “How many cat do you have?"
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  • 2008-04-12 15:34:28
    star
    母猫
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  • 2008-04-12 16:37:16
    Ben
    Well done
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  • 2008-04-12 17:52:15
    Rachel
    不,我只有一种宠物---猫,而且也就只有一只,它叫Princess,是母的。
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  • 2008-04-12 18:23:29
    lhxycy
    我有一只宠物猫,它的名字叫Princess, 它是一只母猫。
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  • 2008-04-13 00:56:03
    zhang jun
    我有一只宠物, 我的宠物是猫, Princess 是一只母猫.
    Please don't describe animals with this word of " woman ". Usually we just say that my pet is a female cat.
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  • 2008-04-13 01:26:21
    jindi
    good
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  • 2008-04-13 02:04:59
    dongzhi10001
    好。也可这样说:
    我有一个宠物,它是一只猫。Princess是一只女猫。
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  • 2008-04-13 02:07:02
    dongzhi10001
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  • 2008-04-13 02:27:19
    tracy