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Your Family
Describe your family. Do you have any brothers or sisters? Are they older or younger?
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bossqin
bossqin
I have a wonderful family . There are four people in my family .My parents and my older brother .My parents have retired .My older brother larger 5 years than mine .
Submitted: 2008-04-14 08:55:01
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2 最后一句改为My elder brother is 5 years older than me
Very good !!
Better to say ' my older brother is 5 years older than me'.
take care
debs