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I am going to Japan next year. I am going there for my friend's wedding. The airport is in Tokyo, but the wedding is in Kobe. We will go by train from Tokyo to Kobe. The trip takes about five hours. After the wedding, we will go to Osaka by subway for a party. The wedding guests come from all over the world: from China, India, the U.S., Canada, and even Mexico. Of course, many guests will be from Japan.

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Submitted: 2008-04-14 09:10:21



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  • 2008-04-14 13:16:58
    Cesz
    hmmm...
    You're doing great! ^^
    I know you can.

    "I will go there for my friends wedding."
    "We will travel by train from Tokyo to Kobe."

    “After the wedding, we will travel through the subway to Osaka for reception.”
    “Most of the guests will come, are Japanese.”
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  • 2008-04-14 14:15:00
    caryn_yevon
    your english is impressive! very good! more practice will make it perfect! ^_^ by the way and i think it is supposed to be :

    my FRIENDS' wedding (if plural and if both are your friend)

    my FRIEND'S wedding (if only one among the two  is your friend)



    keep it up!
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  • 2008-04-15 08:25:18
    jessica
    "I am going to Japan next year. I am going there for my friends wedding"change to"I will go to Japan next  year.I will go there for my friend's wedding."

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  • 2008-04-15 08:25:22
    jessica
    "I am going to Japan next year. I am going there for my friends wedding"change to"I will go to Japan next  year.I will go there for my friend's wedding."

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  • 2008-04-15 15:45:39
    dear花
    发音还是不错的,语速提高一点就好了
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