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Describing Hairstyles

Using both positive and negative attributes, describe the hairstyles of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The young girl does not have short hair. She has long hair.

Well... Today I'm going to be studying for my finals tests before the cristmast break. I already took Chemistry 93%A yay!! and History with 84%B. Let's see how it goes tomorow. In the weeken well... on satuday I'm going to my dance class and on sunday I will stay home.
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Submitted: 2007-12-13 17:56:53



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  • 2007-12-14 13:58:35
    kira
    You are so active!!
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  • 2007-12-16 04:07:19
    Senor Sabio
    You used some slang like yay and you also misspelled some words. 
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  • 2007-12-16 04:08:06
    Senor Sabio
    hey hey hey i got a 2350 on my Sat I!!!
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  • 2008-01-01 16:32:41
    Spencer Rayne
    *Christmas.
    You already took chemistry AND GOT a 93%, yay.
    Never strt a sentence with the word "and" unless no other word will fit or other extenuting cirumstances.
    *weekend
    *Saturday
    all days of the week are capitalized. Sunday.
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  • 2008-01-13 04:54:50
    augusto 英国 ไทย
    OK. But it seems to me that you already speak English perfectly well !! Maybe you need to practice just the pronunciation, if so submit soon some audio comments. But if your pronounciation is also good, consider to enrol in a course of French.
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