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Describing Objects

Describe (with positive and negative attributes) the objects you learned about in this lesson. Ex. These flowers are not red. They are blue.

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Dumarys8821
yes, I have birds, cokatiels right now I have five. They are so cute and pretty.
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Submitted: 2007-12-13 18:02:02



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  • 2007-12-13 19:50:29
    Zarig
    I have five cute and pretty cockatiels.

    [Practice makes perfect!]
    Zarig.
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  • 2007-12-16 00:23:32
    Vcidme09
    ahhhh yo tambn los eh visto they r so cute ^^
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  • 2008-01-01 16:30:06
    Spencer Rayne
    The first sentence wasn't good English at all. You should have said... "Yes, I have birds. I have five coketiels right now" or like "Yes, I have five cokatiel birds right now".
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