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Professions

Describe the professions of four people: a woman, a man, you and me. Use both positive and negative sentences. Ex. I am a student. The man is a doctor; he is not a teacher.

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Dumarys8821
Well... right now I have my camera, my cellphone, a photo album, papers, papaers and more papers... pens, pencils, a lot of things. I'm in the living room. There's the Christmas tree, radio, cds, a lots of things...
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Submitted: 2007-12-13 18:10:25



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  • 2007-12-13 19:56:06
    Zarig
    On my desk are my camera, cellphone, a photo album, many papers, pens, pencils and lots of other items.

    [Practive makes perfect!]
    Zarig.
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  • 2007-12-13 23:24:20
    ishii
    Native's advise(Zarig) is very useful for us.
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  • 2008-01-01 16:25:25
    Spencer Rayne
    Not like... 100% good english, and some of the spelling is off.
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  • 2008-01-19 02:16:30
    paddykins
    very good
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