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Describing People

Using two attributes each, describe six different people: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young and tall.

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sOa
A firiend is a very nice girl. she is Nurse in a big hospital from Lyon. She has brown haires and blue eyes.
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Submitted: 2008-04-14 19:06:19



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  • melaniedrake - 2008-04-15 12:14:43
    Good job. Here are your corrections:

    My friend is a very nice girl. She is a nurse at a large hospital in Lyon. She has brown hair and blue eyes.
     
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  • n/a - 2008-04-19 02:40:53
    There are many ways you can construct sentences in english. Here is another way of writing it :
    My friend is a very nice girl who works in a big hospital in Lyon.  She has brown hair and blue eyes.
    Good work. :)
     
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