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Professions

Describe the professions of four people: a woman, a man, you and me. Use both positive and negative sentences. Ex. I am a student. The man is a doctor; he is not a teacher.

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sOa
On my desk, i have an old picture of my childs. they are on the beach and they played with a yellow ball.
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Submitted: 2008-04-14 19:25:05



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  • 2008-04-15 12:17:16
    melaniedrake
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    On my desk I have an old picture of my children. They are on the beach and they are playing with a yellow ball.
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  • 2008-04-19 02:47:17
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    On my desk I have an old picture of my children.  They are on the beach and playing with a yellow ball.
    C'est très bien.  :)
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