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Brief Introduction

Introduce yourself! Write a brief introduction. What is your name? Why are you learning a new language? Where are you from?

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Hello, My name is kmisa. I am learning English to be a friend with many people of all over the world. I am from Japan.

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Submitted: 2007-11-06 18:12:45

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Erik. - 2007-11-06 18:28:51
Great job kmisa, this is well written. Here is a suggestion to make your essay perfect: "I am learning English in order to befriend many people all over the world." Good luck on your quest and with your studies!

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Zarig - 2007-11-11 16:53:56
Hello! My name is Kmisa. I am l learning English so that I can make friends with many people worldwide. I am from Japan.
[Practice makes perfect.] Zarig.

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