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Describing Objects
Describe a set of objects on a table. Describe another set of objects in a box. EX. The flowers are on the table, and the candy is in the box.
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sOa
sOa
In the morning yesterday, i was whith my children at the parc near from my house. In the afternoon, i was in my house and i have read books.
Submitted: 2008-04-15 12:12:43
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Other Members' Submissions
Well done!
Yesterday morning I was with my children in the park near my house.
Or,
Yesterday morning I spent time playing with my children in the park near our house.
In the afternoon I was at home reading books.
Or,
I spent that afternoon at home reading books.
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