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Vacation transportation
When was the last time that you went on a vacation? Did you go by car, airplane or ship? Where did you go?
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Ray
Ray
I went to Busan in Korea last summer by car.
There are many sea food resturants, girls, hotels and clean beach.
When I arrived there, I'd have reserved our room, and we went to the beach for tanning my skin.
when I did that, I saw a beautiful girl that she looked alone and had hot body.
I moved in on her and said her " hello, where are you from ? "
she said "I'm from Seoul you too ?"
I said " yes, me too. how many people come here with you? "
she laughed and said "why did you ask me that? do you like me?"
I said " yes, absolutly"
she smiled brightly.. I said "would you like some beer? "
After all we stayed together whole vacation.
how about my summer story?
thanks for reading my submission...
bye...
Submitted: 2008-04-16 08:28:20
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CORRECTIONS:
I went to Busan in Korea by car last summer.
many see food restaurants,clean beaches
that looked alone
I moved closer to her and told her " hello'
absolutely
After all we stayed together the whole vacation.
One more correction:
and had a hot body