Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise

Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 3

What are people doing?

Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe what six people are doing: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. I am eating food at the table. I am not sleeping in bed.


Mélinda's submission: Average Rating:
一个女人在喝水后跑步。 男人在吃 饭 和工作。
一个女在玩 耍和笑。 一个男孩在坐 着,他不在站 着,他哭。
我在写 字,我不在睡 觉。你在读书我作了。
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  • 天空
    Mochapoints: 1503  |  Teacher Score: 152 (0%)

    you know everyoneyou should tell us he does and he doesn't.be careful.look the title.come on!

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  • cuppachino ɐddn...
    Mochapoints: 15192  |  Teacher Score: 8602 (100%)

    一个女人在喝水后跑步。(Une femme boit et puis elle court.) C'est très bien!

    一个男人在吃饭和工作。(Un homme est de manger et de travail.) L'article déinitiv/indéfinitiv est nécessaire avant un nom.

    一个女在玩耍和笑。 Attention: en français, "fille" = jeune personne ou un enfant de sexe féminin, mais ce n'est pas le cas en anglais et en chinois.  女孩=girl, 女=daughter

    一个男孩在坐着,他不站着,他正在哭。Parfois, on utilise 不是 pour la négation d'une action. 正在 indique l'action est en cours.

    在写字,我不在睡觉。你在读书我d'un pronom + 的 = possessif: 我=Je, 我的=mon/ma.  作= écriture / composition

    Oui, oublié d'écrire la forme négative de certaines phrases, comme d'autres l'ont dit. Mais concentrons-nous sur les bases pour l'instant. :) C'est un excellent travail !

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  • melinda.t
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    Good work. ^-^

    It's not  “一个女”. It's “一个女人”.

    It will be better that “你在读书我在写作业”.

    Submitted over a year ago

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