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Describe your profile picture. What color hair do you have? Is your hair long or short? What color eyes do you have? Do you have any facial hair?
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bossqin
bossqin
I am yinyujuan .I have a black hair which is short and shine .I have a short nose and black eye .I am a common girl .
Submitted: 2008-04-19 08:23:30
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Great - very good. Only some small changes.
Better to say : I am Yinyu Juan. I have black hair which is short and shiny. I have a short nose and black eyes. I am a normal girl.
Take care
Debs