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Describe the Weather.

Describe today's date and weather. What is the date today? Is it hot or cold? Is it raining? What is the weather supposed to be tomorrow?

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dola
Today is 20 april 2008, the weather is very nice, it was warm but there were some cold refreshinh winds,tomorrow maybe will be more hot.
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Submitted: 2008-04-20 00:09:53



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  • 2008-04-20 00:32:46
    Zarig
    Today is Sunday, April 20, 2008. The weather is very nice and warm with a cool refreshing wind blowing; maybe tomorrow will be hotter.

    [In written English:
    Date: Sunday, April 20, 2008.
    Capitalization: April; all months of the year.
    Spelling: refreshing.
    Punctuation: there is always a space after the punctuation mark (except for the dash).
    Verb tense: needs attention.]
    Comparatives: hot, hotter, hottest.]

    Practice makes perfect!
    Zarig.
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