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Using both positive and negative attributes, describe the hairstyles of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The young girl does not have short hair. She has long hair.

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AzureWolf
Wo yao qu pao bu. Wo yao qu xie zi blog he du blogs. Wo yao qu chi ice cream. I will run. i will write a blog and read blogs. I will eat ice cream. (I cannot write in Chinese yet! Sorry!)
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Submitted: 2008-04-29 13:21:11



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  • Holly wu - 2008-04-29 13:42:30
    wo yao xie bo ke (blog) he kan bo ke .
    wo yao qu chi bing ji lin (ice cream)
     
  • Tyler Banks - 2008-04-29 13:43:19
    Nothing < That`s OK,. YOU are a good man,
    bi wo hai yao hao !!
    (I cannot write in English yet!  Sorry!) HEHE,, jiayou |!
     
  • Tyler Banks - 2008-04-29 13:43:26
    Nothing < That`s OK,. YOU are a good man,
    bi wo hai yao hao !!
    (I cannot write in English yet!  Sorry!) HEHE,, jiayou |!
     
  • qian - 2008-04-29 13:47:00
    good
     
  • ming - 2008-04-29 13:48:42
    我要去跑步,我要去写博客,我要去吃冰激凌.
     
  • yuwu - 2008-04-29 13:48:46
    study step by step 逐步地学习. 加油!
    good!
     
  • yiyi666 - 2008-04-29 13:50:20
    不错,加油哦
     
  • rosa - 2008-04-29 13:59:32
    1.Wo yao qu xie zi blog he du blogs.
      (You can try. )
        -->Wo yao qu XIE blog han dou blogs.
      or-->Wo yao qu XIE blog han YUE DOU blogs.
    2."ice cream" --> bing chi lin
     
  • Alex - 2008-04-29 14:01:31
    ok, good.
    xie bo ke, kan bo ke. 写博客, 看博客.
    chi bing jilin. 吃冰激淋.
     
  • Avril lan - 2008-04-29 14:06:57
    It's good .I believe you can do better,come on !the first sentence is "我要去跑步"
    the second is"我要去写博客"and Pinyin is"wo yao qu xie bo ke he du bo ke"(Blog =bo ke)
    the third is "我要去吃冰淇淋" (ice cream=bing qi lin)
     
  • goldenway - 2008-04-29 20:40:20
    you are wonderful, wonderful work, well done
     

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