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Using both positive and negative attributes, describe the hairstyles of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The young girl does not have short hair. She has long hair.

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Wo yao qu pao bu. Wo yao qu xie zi blog he du blogs. Wo yao qu chi ice cream. I will run. i will write a blog and read blogs. I will eat ice cream. (I cannot write in Chinese yet! Sorry!)

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Submitted: 2008-04-29 13:21:11

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Holly wu - 2008-04-29 13:42:30
wo yao xie bo ke (blog) he kan bo ke .
wo yao qu chi bing ji lin (ice cream)

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Tyler Banks - 2008-04-29 13:43:19
Nothing < That`s OK,. YOU are a good man,
bi wo hai yao hao !!
(I cannot write in English yet! Sorry!) HEHE,, jiayou |!

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Tyler Banks - 2008-04-29 13:43:26
Nothing < That`s OK,. YOU are a good man,
bi wo hai yao hao !!
(I cannot write in English yet! Sorry!) HEHE,, jiayou |!

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qian - 2008-04-29 13:47:00
good

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ming - 2008-04-29 13:48:42
我要去跑步,我要去写博客,我要去吃冰激凌.

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yuwu - 2008-04-29 13:48:46
study step by step 逐步地学习. 加油!
good!

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yiyi666 - 2008-04-29 13:50:20
不错,加油哦

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rosa - 2008-04-29 13:59:32
1.Wo yao qu xie zi blog he du blogs.
(You can try. )
-->Wo yao qu XIE blog han dou blogs.
or-->Wo yao qu XIE blog han YUE DOU blogs.
2."ice cream" --> bing chi lin

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Alex - 2008-04-29 14:01:31
ok, good.
xie bo ke, kan bo ke. 写博客, 看博客.
chi bing jilin. 吃冰激淋.

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Avril lan - 2008-04-29 14:06:57
It's good .I believe you can do better,come on !the first sentence is "我要去跑步"
the second is"我要去写博客"and Pinyin is"wo yao qu xie bo ke he du bo ke"(Blog =bo ke)
the third is "我要去吃冰淇淋" (ice cream=bing qi lin)

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goldenway - 2008-04-29 20:40:20
you are wonderful, wonderful work, well done

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