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Comparisons and Superlatives

Using the vocabulary from the lesson, compare a set of objects. EX. This dog is bigger than that dog.

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Partner0722
My nightly routine is go to university to learn English, then I take my car and go at home, I usually have my dinner at 9:30 p.m. after I go to bed two hours later.
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Submitted: 2008-05-02 00:11:58



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  • 2008-05-04 14:27:33
    annabelle
    This is very good.  I would offer you the following thoughts:  "My evening routine is that I go to university,  where I am taking classes to learn English.  After class,  I drive home in my car,  have my dinner-- usually at 9:30 p.m., and  then go to bed two hours later."     

    Timing and sequence of actions are always diffcult.  The word "after" as used in your    sentence means that first you go to bed and then you have dinner, which is not what you mean.  You could say  "Afterwards,  I go to bed."  Or "After dinner, I go to bed."

    It is always easier when trying to describe a sequence of actions to break it down into more than one sentence. 

    Best regards
    annabelle

    best regards
    annabelle
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