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Going on Vacation

Describe a vacation you are taking? When and where are you going? What are you going to do?

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Kessy
I go to university by bus and sometimes my mother takes me by car. Well I like to go to several places by bus or by car. Taxi, train and subway I rarely use. And I use only bike to exercise.
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Submitted: 2008-05-03 19:35:17



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  • 2008-05-03 23:46:24
    Xavier 加维也
    Very nice! Maybe at the end you can say "And I only use my bike to exercise"
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  • 2008-05-04 12:43:23
    yantianline
    我乘公共汽车上大学, 有时母亲开车带我去, 我喜欢乘公共汽车及小汽车去几个地方, 我很小乘出租车, 火车及地铁,  并且我仅骑自行车去锻炼
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  • 2008-05-08 23:47:47
    BlueStory
    Hey Kessy!
    Nothing could be better ;)
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