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Giving and Receiving
Describe a present you have received. What was it? Who did you get it from? Is there something you gave in return?
Author:
corinne
corinne
I live in France. I have visited several countries : England, Belgium, Switzerland, Italy, Spain, Portugal, Croatie and Montenegro, Crete. I have been to northern USA too. Next summer, I will go to Malte.
I would like to go Australia, for several reasons: because it's far away from France and to know the way of life of Australians (surfing, sun and so on ). Russia is also a country that I would like to visit, because of its history and its beauty. Finally, I'd like to visit China too, because it's a huge and diversified country. Besides, I like chinese food. But, in my opinion, every country is worth seeing, and if I had time, I would like to go around the world.
Submitted: 2008-05-04 19:36:24
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And I envy you because of your visitings!
Happy travels!:-)
(Les adjectifs ayant un rapport avec les noms qui exigent une première lettre en majuscule (les pays etc), sont capitalisées eux-mêmes.)
Very good. Australia is wonderful but I am biased as I live there. I am going to France in September. I am very excited.
In some places you used French version of the words( like in proper names like Crotia) however I don't oppose to the idea of doing so. I'm happy you'd like to visit Australia yet you have got to remember that you can go<< To >>Australia not go Australia.
Well written.
Arian
But you paid not attention on it and started writing on an absolutely a different one. It is not fair. I am of the opinion that we must answer the inquired questions and this not only makes us confident but also increases our proficiency.
The interviewer questioned "Describe a present you have received. What was it? Who did you get it from? Is there something you gave in return?"
and you must have answered about it. I suggest you to write it again if you don't mind. Good luck
MALTA
...and to know the way of life of Australians - "and to get to know the way of life ..."