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Your Last Vacation

Describe your last vacation. Where was the last place you vacationed? What activities and sites do you recommend for other vacationers?

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Dasha
the last place i vacationed was a camp in the Crimea,there were awful сonditions for being: food, toilet,the director was a evil terrible woman=) i didnt like the camp at all, but i met there a lot of good people and we had a great time together=)there was also a guy i fell in love=)thats why this camp seemed not to be such a awful place=)
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Submitted: 2008-05-08 12:30:49



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  • 2008-05-10 09:32:38
    Irina
    Шикарно))Прямо излила душу%))
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  • 2008-05-10 14:31:36
    Dasha
    нда чет расперло прям=))
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  • 2008-05-25 02:03:28
    ambitionforammu...
    "The last place I went on vacation to was a camp in the Crimea. The living conditions were awful. The director was a horrible woman. I didn't like the camp at all but I met a lot of good people there, we had a great time together and I fell in love with a guy. That is why the camp didn't seem to be such an awful place."

    You've definitely got the grasp of the language, it's just your sentence structure that is letting you down really. Keep up the good work. :)
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  • 2008-10-19 22:37:14
    aslan
    go ahead
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