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Describing Hairstyles
Using both positive and negative attributes, describe the hairstyles of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The young girl does not have short hair. She has long hair.
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demi
demi
Today is Tuesday, I am worked. On the evening of today, my general manager, my fellow and I are going to shopping.
My general manager has a white beard and short black hairt. My fellow does not have long red hairt, but she has short glad hairt.
Submitted: 2008-05-20 14:20:42
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Tomorrow is Saturday, but I must work. (A native speaker would probably use "have to" instead of "must") OR Tomorrow is Saturday, but I will be working.
Good try! you may write also in this way 'Tomorrow is Saturday, but I have to go to work.' Keep on the good work.
Ciao ciao!
Eliz
My general manager has a white beard and short black hair. My fellow does not have long red hair, but she has short black(?) hair. I'm not sure what glad hair (notice there is not a "t' on the end of hair) means. I am guessing that you may have meant black hair, unless you meant a glad heart.
Cheers
Eliz