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At the café.
Describe what you order at a café. What is your favorite drink? Do you order a sandwich or pastry?
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pengshuxin

pengshuxin
In café, I will order a cup of apple juice and add some ices in it. besides, I also want a piece of pastry. Sandwich is my favorite food as well as.
Submitted: 2008-05-13 04:49:22
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In a café, I order a cup of apple juice and add some ices in it.
"will order" is ok, but usually people talk in present tense. Like, "I go to school," "I dance at parties." Same thing, "I order at a café."
I also like to have some pastry.
Besides is a tricky word. The meaning is close to "also," but it is a little different. See examples:
"I cannot go outside. Besides, I should study at home."
"We cannot be lovers. Besides, I am moving."
"I cannot go outside. It is ok because I should study at home."
"We cannot be lovers. It is ok because I am moving."
The meaning is closer to "it is ok because" than "also."
Sandwich is a favorite of mine as well.
Keep practicing! =)