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When and where?

Describe where six people are going and at what time: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The man is going to the restaurant at eight o’clock.

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El daddy
My Family is big. and they´re like to play basseball, All my family like that.
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Submitted: 2008-05-17 15:10:53



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  • 2008-05-21 03:16:01
    Tender Baby Gir...
    My family is big. They like to play baseball.
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    I have a big family that likes to play baseball.
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  • 2008-07-25 11:22:05
    Sophie
    My family is big.  They like to play basketball. All of my family likes to play basketball.

    El daddy,
    Try writing short sentences for now.  Be aware of putting a period at the end of each sentence and capitalize the first letter of each sentence.
    Thanks,
    Sophie
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