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Décrire les gens

Using two attributes each, describe six different people: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young and tall.

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marcelhb
Est personne est homme, riche, jeune et mince.
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Submitted: 2008-05-18 05:01:32



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  • 2008-05-18 07:00:14
    Geneviève Anne
    You cannot have the verb "est" twice...

    "Mon ami est une personne riche, jeune et mince.  C'est un homme."

    ou:

    "Mon ami est un jeune homme.  Il est riche et mince."
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