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Favorite Meal

Describe your favorite meal. What are the ingredients used to prepare the meal?

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I love to eat sushi. I simply adore Japanese food and I eat it almost every week-end. My favorite however is shrimp and strawberry. Also, I use avocado, cucumbers, crab, smoked salmon, mango, young snow pea shoots and I make my personal Japanese mayonnaise. Try this one with smoked salmon and mango. It is delicious !!!

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Submitted: 2008-05-19 05:04:45

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Palma - 2008-05-20 21:38:18
You did well but here are some small suggestions to make it flow more natural.

My favorite is shrimp and strawberry; however, I also use avocado, cucumbers, crab, smoked salmon, mango, young snow pea shoots and I make my personal Japanese mayonnaise. I highly recommend smoked salmon and mango. It is delicious !!!

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Astudent - 2008-05-26 12:18:52
Super!! Both the recipe and the submission :)
I have nothing to add.
Good luck!

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maxairspeed - 2008-06-09 03:19:35
I don't see any errors. I think it is pretty much perfect! Lets eat!

Max
^..^

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