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描述物体

Describe the objects you learned about in this lesson. Use both positive and negative attributes. Ex. There are five buildings. Two buildings are green. Three buildings are not green. They are black.

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afridi@china
shin zai wuo zhou way mao.shen ma sha hao wuo shao hez wuo shan zhou jiu gonzhou. this time i'm doing business .but when i was a child my dream job was to be a military man.
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Submitted: 2008-05-24 07:58:20



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  • 2008-05-24 08:55:33
    skoda1031
    我完全看不明白
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  • 2008-05-24 09:06:58
    lvy
    you dai jin bu o .I hope you hard study chinese.
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  • 2008-05-24 09:07:00
    lvy
    you dai jin bu o .I hope you hard study chinese.
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  • 2008-05-24 09:11:15
    晓风明月
    加油！你再尝试一下吧！你会做的很好！
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  • 2008-05-26 01:06:57
    Carole
    I think you should say: xian zai wo zuo wai mao,dang wo shi hai zi de shihou, wo xiang dang jun ren.

    : )
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  • 2008-05-26 07:29:42
    刘祁
    terrible Chinese, man, you must learn pinyin again! Don't give up, keep on going!
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  • 2008-05-27 09:17:32
    REO
    xian zai  wo shi yi ming shang ren ,dan shi dang wo xiao shi hou ,wo de li xiang shi zuo yi ming  jun ren.
    现在我是一名商人，但是，当我小时候，我的理想是做一名军人。
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