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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 3

When are the activities?

Instructions: Provide the time for the activities of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The girls are reading a book at nine o’clock. The boys play in the bedroom at seven thirty.

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The old men are walking at seven o'clock and the fat women are cooking at eleven fifteen. I will run in the park at sixteen o'clock
and you are studing in the school at nineteen ten. The girls are
studing in the living room at twelve o'clock and de boys are playing
with ball in the street at ten thirty.
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  • Sally Moore
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    The old men are walking at seven o'clock, and the fat women are cooking at eleven fifteen. [When there are two independent clauses separated by a conjunction, it is necessary to use a comma before the conjunction.] I will run in the park at sixteen four o'clock, and you are studying in the school at nineteen seven ten. [I have replaced the military time with standard time.] The girls are studying in the living room at twelve o'clock, and de the boys are playing with ball in the street at ten thirty.

    You are doing very well. Even before any corrections, you could easily be understood. These changes will help you to be more grammatically correct. Do not hesitated to ask if you have questions. Your work is very good. Keep it up!  \o/

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  • mamoun68
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    I born in Jordan at 1968 and i finsh studying high school in MBA in 2007 , And my woman is working home sister since 1963 , And my father is retierd since 1994 , and my brother working is engeering ,and we are lovely footbal.

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  • hassan
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    a woman is sitting on the chair and a man is reading abook

    a girl is walking in a park.

    a boy is playing footbal and iam writing

    and idint know any thing about you.

     

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  • hassan
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    hi i born in kashmar iran igrew up there

    and i went to teran in 1994 for take bs and ms dgree

    i got marrid marrid ten years ago

    i have 2 childeren 1 boy and 1 girl

     

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  • Evita
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    The woman is  speking whith your daughter

    now at forteen o'clock.

    The curious man  will watch interessant documentary tomorow at seven forty.

    I will go a swiming today in tha affternoon.

     

    The shoes's girl are dirty.

    You are a stressad .

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  • manu
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    i see the men, and this men saied hello for a beatiful woman and one girl asked for a boy " where are you?" and the boy saied " i'm hear". soo, i'm crazy?

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  • keti
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    de - you mean the

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  • asfiya
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    m too far to learn english, please help me out

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  • jamal merhy
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    the man is swimming in the pool meanwhile a woman is taking a sunbath .the girls  are working late in the office at twenty hours and the boys are painting in the studio at eleven fifteen.I will brushing my hair at nine thirty and you are cleaning the house at nine  fifteen .

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  • bagheri
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    I get up at seven o'clock and I eat breakfast at seven ten .

    I sometimes go to work  on foot at seven fifteen o'clock .

    I  sometimes  search to net  at ten o'clock and I check my message  at eleven o'clock.

     

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  • adel_75
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    hi

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  • sushi
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    hi my tuter

    I am writing a invitation for arranging a party and I want reponse from my friends that the time and place that i have decied, will be siutable for them.

    Hi everone,

    As you know our profeser Dr. bent will retiring on next month. I think we should give a bid of fairewell him. For I have a plane if everyone will be agree then we can implement this plane. I have decied the time and place for party, if anyone have some work on that day then we will decied any other day as our convenious.

    time is 7:30 and place lake wauburg on sunday.

    Please reply me as soon as possible.

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  • shamna
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    a women is washing clothes.a man has many works in his office.a girl is reading magazine.a boy is going outside.i have husband and one kid 

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  • s200988n
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    im walking in the park at 8 o,clock in the morning.

    my husband is in the  house and my doughter is working in the bank she is maried and her husband is engineer.

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  • s200988n
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    im sara

    im forty five years old . i like sometimes walking in the park with my friend.

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  • purshoth
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    good

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  • c388c388
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    i weak up at six oclock in this morning and  eat breakfast and  go to the park .weather was very good an come back at  home in seven o,clock

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  • eunice
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    The old men are walking at seven o`clock and the fat women are cooking at eleven fifteen. I will run in the park at sixteen o`clock and you are studying in the school at nine ten.The girls are studying in the living room at twelve o`clock and the boys are playing ball in the street at ten thirty

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  • rex
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    The old men are walking at seven o'clock and the fat women are cooking at eleven fifteen. I will run in the park at sixteen o'clock and you are studing in the school at nineteen ten. The girls are studing in the living room at twelve o'clock and de boys are playing with ball in the street at ten thirty.

    excellent!

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  • swathi
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    the old men are walking at seven o'clock and the fat women are cooking at eleven fiffteen. i will run in the park at sixteen o'clock and you are studing at nineteen ten. the girls are studing in the living room at twelve o'colck and de boys are playing with ball in the street at ten thirty.

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  • latifss55
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    a girl is reading book- she lay an looking gld. i think she is reading a strange story

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  • jazmin alberto
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    this sentences have mistakes.

     

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  • jazmin alberto
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    the man is singing at six o'clock and his beautiful woman is taking a shower at seven ten. I will study english at nine o'clock and you are playing soccer at ten. The girls are dancing in the school at eleven o'clock and the boys are walking in the street at twelve thirty. 

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

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  • lwmendes
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    The lady is going to visit her friend that live abroad and her fly will take off at six o'clock. The man needs to find his wallet because he want to buy tickets for the game at eight pm tonight. A little girls is studying for the test at seven o'clock tomorow. The boy will play soccer with friends next sunday at noon. You and I are studying english to the test next friday at fifteen half.

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  • xuyan
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    The young woman is walking at  eight o'clock. The fat man is eating at seven o'clock. A girl  is dancing at nine o'clock. A boy is playing football on the playground at ten o'clock. I will do some exercise at sixteen. you are reading book at twelve o'clock.

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  • cookie
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    The old man was walking at seven o'clock and the fat woman was cooking at eleven fifteen.I was running in the park at sixteen o'clock and you were studying in the school at nineteen ten.The girls were studying in the living room at twelve o'clock and the boys werw playing in the street at ten thirty

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  • lijy mathew
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    daily routine

    i am wake up at 6 o' clock and then morning break fast.i dressed ,and i go to office by bus.

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  • alexandre
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    is verrygood

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  • wmnls25
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    It is 6pm, my mother and father are cooking dinner, the girl my sister is watching TV, and the boy my brother is listening to the muisc, and you are giving the table a wipe, and I am taking some fool on it.

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  • asghar
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    people   excuse to dislike  what  they canot get

     

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    120

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  • armadilha
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    teh woman go to the mall at six o'clock, the man will walk in the city at five o'clock. The girl study at twenty-four o'clock, the boy will go to paly soccer at ten o'clock.I will flirt in the party at sixteen o'clock and you will play tomorrow.

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  • Alena
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     The old men are walking at seven o'clock and the fat women are cooking at eleven fifteen. I am going to run in the park at sixteen o'clock and you are studing in the school at nineteen ten. The girls are studing in the living room at twelve o'clock and the boys are playing with the ball in the street at ten thirty.

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  • majnoon26
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    the men are going to gym at five o"clok and the women want join them at six oclok. A boy see them and deside jion them at night.their gym is on first steet .I hop they have a nice time

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  • ali
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    hi

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  • Mariefreedom
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    I will visited English lesson at seven o'clock. I wake up at seven o'clock. I am reading book of Egypťan Sinuhet. I am at work here.

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  • moly
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  • wateen
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    hi..im wateen..i.am from saudi arabia>>

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  • wateen
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    i.have 3childrin>>12years

    9years

    and 4 years..and i.am very happy with my family

     

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  • woil
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    hloooooo

     

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  • ciceia
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  • vivi826
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    You let me reading a book, the above describes a very warm family picture, a man and a woman gave birth to a boy and a girl, woman 7:00 am to prepare breakfast, get up at 7:30 a man reading the newspaper, the girl 8 point to study dance, boys, 9:00 to school on time! Such an extraordinary life every day!
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  • So0oso
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    hiiiii every body

    my name is soso

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  • camilla_gholipo...
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    good

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  • c388c388
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    the old woman and the old man  walking in the park at this mornig. the girl is cooking food  for lunch.the boy sleeping in the bedrh,he must  go to the university at 9 o,clock.

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  • c388c388
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    the man is working in the shop.the woman is making food for lunch.the girl eating breakfast at seven o,clok. the boy is paying in the yard .

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  • TITOoO
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    the old men are walking at seven o'clock and the fat women are cooking at eleven fifteen. i will run in the park at sixteen o'clock and you are studing in the school at nineteen ten. the girls are studing in the living room at twelve o'clock and de boys are playing with ball in the street at ten thirty.

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  • ahmedhammad
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    it should be studying but it appears that you are making good progress

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  • zeko
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    I am zeko , from libya , 23 age and studying in engineering facluty , I get up at seven o’lock I do not married , I wish becomes goodboy , I Like play football and swim but I do not like watch Tv and walk

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  • omid
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    i donot know

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  • shahnaz
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    The old women are wake up at six o'lok and the fat man are eating at everytimes.I will run in the street at ten o'clok and you are  studing in the in the living room at eight o;clok.

     

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  • shahnaz
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    The old man are walking at six o'clock and the fat women are cooking at ten fifteen. I will run in the park at seven o;clok and you are studing in the university at fifteen five. The girs are studing in the living room at ten o;clok and the boys are swimming in the pool at ten o;clok.

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  • ahmed
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    The house wife is geting shower at seven o'clock and the father is reading news paper. at same time me and my brather are playing football. My sister is making chatting on internet at ten O'clock and you are washing your car at fifteen o'clock.

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  • Alicemagdalen
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  • cute.sweet110
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    i want to a candy shop at eleven thirty o'clock .Shopkeeper was a kind women, a old men was cleaning the shop, a cute girl and a sweet boy was buying some candies and i wanted to have some sweets for you.

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  • marzieh
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    Hello,i was born in isfahan.i was living there for sixteen years and after that i came to tehran to study in univercity.

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  • marzieh
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    The man was walking at six o'clock and the woman cooked sth for lunch at twelve and the girl are trying to put her shoes to go to a party at seven pm and the boy are watching football on tv at seven pm and you will take a shower at nine o'clock and i will go to bed at eleven o'clock.

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  • homiharshita
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    the girl are playing football.

    Ram is reading a book.

    this girl is seventeen year old.

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  • homiharshita
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    one day a girl playing football. his brother came in and join the game both are playing football wellbut mother ask the girl came here you are not playing football. the girl said mother why are you call me.

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  • Maryam_chz
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    The old men are walking at seven o'clock and the fat women are cooking at eleven fifteen I am going run in the park at six o'clock and you are studing in the school at ten. The girls are studing in the living room at twelve o'clock and the boys are playing with ball in the street.

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  • vulinhpc
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    Yesterday I met my girlfriend at nice o'clock. I got her from busstop and went back to my house. After that I leaded  her to the market to buy some things for luch. On the road we met an accident. The botobike has been destroyed by a big van. Three peoples were die. One girl was crying next to her mother's corpse. The accident was happened at ten but the police come too late at twelve a clock. We were there fifteen minutes and then we leave. We came back from market at quater pass twelve..

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  • elsawyeisa
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    i born in eygpt i love footballand my family too

    all girl think that all boys loving thier

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  • Andriy
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    My name is Andriy. I live in Ukraine in Lugansk. I am a student. I have 21. I always get up at 6 oclock and to run with my friends. I'm have a prity girl and I very love her. Her name is Masha.

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  • manely
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    my name is farhad.i,m from iran.my job is product manager in the dairy factory.

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  • marcodiscon
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    Hi, I am from brazil , please help me speak the english linguage I´m beginner and I wolud like of learn english,to labor market and make friendship!    

    Thank you ............................

     

     

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  • amona
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    هلا انا ابي اتعلم انجلس همتكم معاي

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  • Ricardo
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    Very good.

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  • english
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    thank you

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  • Beulajustin
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    I'll run in the park at four o'clock and you are studying in the school at seven ten.

    (you can use standard time and avoid spelling mistakes. your work is good and continue your lessons.)

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  • natally kamel a...
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    good work marco

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    i((((am))))stydying

     

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  • taty_niger
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    A woman is talking with her son at eigth o'clock. An old man is playing the piano at a quarter past trhee. A girl is doing her homeworks at half past eleven. A boy is watching tv at five o'clock. Yuo are cooking at a quarter to one. I'm writing a letter at four o'clock.

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  • enes
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    I am enes and sudying english

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  • Lajosn
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    "studying" is correct

    "the boys are playing with a ball"

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  • hewii
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    the oman prepared the food fo her girl to eat it alo her boy.when aboy and girl walk on the streat they met big man. this man look like adengourse man so boy and girl run away from him.

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  • IbraHERO
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    man seven o'clock

    woman eleven fifteen

    me sixteen o'clock

    you nineteen ten

    girls twelve o'clock

    boy ten thirty

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  • tamvtt
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    The beautifull woman is working at her office and she is typing her report. A man enter and say hi with her. A boy is sitting on the chair and reading newspaper after he finish his works in the afrernoon. The girl is singing a favourite song when she listen to music. And me, I am preparing dinner for all people.

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  • tamo7a
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     i escape from my home in eight clock and arrive to work in nine clock and finish my work on seventeen clock and like walking to home until sixteen clock.

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  • shefa
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    the old man are going to his jop at one oclock,& his wife are cooking at three oclock for dinner, she had two child giels & boys they playing with ball in the garden at ten thirty.

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  • Brinza Olga
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  • roselam
    Mochapoints: 730  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    Hi,

    Iam from Vietnam ,I am a study. I learning english in online. Would you like i dowload someone lesson i learned.

    Thanks.

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  • hasoony
    Mochapoints: 402  |  Teacher Score: 16 (0%)

    السلام عليكم أنا أبي أتعلم أنجليزي ممكن المساعدة

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  • hasoony
    Mochapoints: 402  |  Teacher Score: 16 (0%)

    Help

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  • abuhomaid
    Mochapoints: 108  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    i am playing gamzer of bilirdos

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  • bayan
    Mochapoints: 116  |  Teacher Score: 16 (0%)

    great

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  • serpil
    Mochapoints: 596  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    I 'm going to school at seven o'clock every morning and you are walking down the street at eight o'clock.The thin men are running in the park at ten o'clock.The girls are playing tennis at eleven o'clock.My mather will shopp in the market at six o'clock and my father will come to home at nine o'clock.

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  • shadi
    Mochapoints: 108  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    My name is Shadi, and I am not married. I was born in 1980 in Jordan. I have finished master in Arabic language, and I am lookin forward to complete PhD in Germany at the same of my study. I like so much reading and friendship.

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  • Michael
    Mochapoints: 110  |  Teacher Score: 10 (0%)

    Hi Marco i think that your english is very good and your writing too, just try to get better your writing, so bye my friend and take care. 

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  • anas
    Mochapoints: 16340  |  Teacher Score: 1315 (100%)

    good

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  • Daniela Alves
    Mochapoints: 127  |  Teacher Score: 18 (0%)

    nine hours

    seven

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  • medardofranco
    Mochapoints: 909  |  Teacher Score: 140 (0%)

    muito bom,  very good my friend. muy bien amigo.

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    Mochapoints: 136  |  Teacher Score: 36 (0%)
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  • mehrdadhnaghavi
    Mochapoints: 102  |  Teacher Score:(0%)
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  • thu phuong
    Mochapoints: 110  |  Teacher Score: 10 (0%)

    can you help me ,please?

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  • alzoubim67
    Mochapoints: 108  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    thank

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  • samy
    Mochapoints: 7871  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    the old women is reading pook at 9 oclock, and the yong man is playng fotball at 9,fiftin

    and i eating my lunch at twelve thirty

    thegirlis are studing in the universty

     

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  • luciano_andrad
    Mochapoints: 10326  |  Teacher Score: 641 (92%)

    no understand "AT NINETEEN TEN" ?????

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  • sun in
    Mochapoints: 134  |  Teacher Score: 34 (0%)

    speak

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  • sun in
    Mochapoints: 134  |  Teacher Score: 34 (0%)

    speak

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  • sun in
    Mochapoints: 134  |  Teacher Score: 34 (0%)

    tell

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  • sun in
    Mochapoints: 134  |  Teacher Score: 34 (0%)

    this

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  • selahattin
    Mochapoints: 437  |  Teacher Score: 56 (0%)

    nice

    Submitted over a year ago
  • binnur
    Mochapoints: 7374  |  Teacher Score: 114 (0%)

    The woman make up on everyday at five oc'lock p.m.  The handsome man driving a car at 10 o'clock. The girl listening to music at 8:30 p.m. The fat boy walked to park at 8:15. I am working 9:00 a.m behind 7.00 p.m. You walked at 9:00 o'clock

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  • Palitha
    Mochapoints: 400  |  Teacher Score: 10 (0%)

    The old men is walking at seven o'clock and I shall run in the park at sixteen o'clock.The fat women is cooking at eleven fifteen. and you are studing in the school at nineteen ten. The girls are studing in the living room at the twele o'clock and the boys are playing  with ball in the street at ten thirty

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  • vinod
    Mochapoints: 110  |  Teacher Score: 10 (0%)

    hi

     

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  • moon
    Mochapoints: 1400  |  Teacher Score: 16 (0%)

    women try  of  overweight           the  attenuation   boys play ball and girls do workin the apparel dressmaker

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  • nyanhtetthar
    Mochapoints: 111  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    I was born in 1970. Up to now, I've been studying English for over 25 year since I was a  matriculation student. But I'm sure that I'm so weak at this language. So, I'm now studying at this web.

    Submitted over a year ago
  • fahim
    Mochapoints: 108  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    i want learn eng

     

    Submitted over a year ago
  • BRENDA KAMILLE ...
    Mochapoints: 108  |  Teacher Score:(0%)
    I found much to link up because I realize that English is not very difficult as penssando.
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  • mohamed elsayed...
    Mochapoints: 118  |  Teacher Score: 18 (0%)

    heloo all i;m happy for you

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  • mohamed elsayed...
    Mochapoints: 118  |  Teacher Score: 18 (0%)
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  • SHIRLEY
    Mochapoints: 347  |  Teacher Score: 218 (0%)
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  • sanduni
    Mochapoints: 108  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    i like study german language

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  • meiyun07
    Mochapoints: 126  |  Teacher Score: 26 (0%)

    A young woman is speaking with a young man - her boy friend at the park . Another young man is seating at the chair and reading the newspaper . While a little girl - his daughter is eating the ice-cream , a little boy - his son is playing the balls . You are singing the Chinese song and I am dancing follow your songs .

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  • meiyun07
    Mochapoints: 126  |  Teacher Score: 26 (0%)

    Hello , everyone !

    I want to improve my English . So , could you pls help me , let's speak English fluently . Tks !

    Submitted over a year ago
  • Daniel Macedo
    Mochapoints: 125  |  Teacher Score: 16 (0%)

    First of all I will go to write about me. Everyday I wake up at 7 am, so I have breakfast at 8 am, after have a shower. At 8:30 am I go out to university, there I do clean my table and start my daily works. This week I'm doing 3 articles for the Journal of Materials Science, last week I did only 1 article. In my laboratory there are a woman, a man and a guy who are much ugly. I have much afraid them, but I need to learn living with them.

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  • Yone
    Mochapoints: 831  |  Teacher Score: 26 (0%)
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  • andyletian1111
    Mochapoints: 123  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    this website is like a  community.

    Submitted over a year ago
  • m7md
    Mochapoints: 950  |  Teacher Score: 10 (0%)

    انا مش عارف

     

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  • Shirley
    Mochapoints: 1839  |  Teacher Score: 387 (100%)

    hi! how are you?

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  • july
    Mochapoints: 216  |  Teacher Score: 10 (0%)

    hi i am july.

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  • sabajdin krasni...
    Mochapoints: 108  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    kam shume deshire qe te mesoj gjermanisht , per kete site kam mesuar tani e menje her kam filluar te kyqem ne te , por nuk po me lejohet , po thot qe duhet te paguash e te ju them te drejten nuk kame mundesi me be pages sepse vertet jam i varfer

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  • mand0o0o0o
    Mochapoints: 108  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    The old men are walking at seven o'clock and the fat women is cooking at eleven o'clock .I will run in the park at six o'clock and you are studing in the school at nine . The girls are studing in the living room at twelve o'clock and the boys are playing with ball in the street at ten thirty

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  • Beta
    Mochapoints: 448  |  Teacher Score: 221 (0%)
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  • Mai Chi Cong
    Mochapoints: 110  |  Teacher Score: 10 (0%)
    ask
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  • agamy
    Mochapoints: 108  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    sette

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  • hashamimran
    Mochapoints: 108  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    The old men are walking at seven o clock and the fat women are cooking at eleven fifteen.iwill run in the park at sixteen o clock and you are studing inthe school at nineteen ten.the girls are studing in the living room at twelve o clock and de boys are playing with ball in the street at ten thirty

    Submitted over a year ago
  • kedadra
    Mochapoints: 340  |  Teacher Score: 174 (0%)

    assez bien

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  • NASIM HAIDER
    Mochapoints: 108  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    The woman bakes at nine while the man watches her doing that. A girl speaks to her neighbour while a boy does his homework. As you teach me how to speak correct english, I learn

    Submitted over a year ago
  • Mauricio Diaz
    Mochapoints: 5559  |  Teacher Score: 580

    ME PARECE PERFECTO SOLO QUE TE EQUIVOCASTE CUANDO IVAS A ESCRI

    BIR AND THE BOYS ARE PLAYIN; EN VEZ DE ESO ESCRIBISTE AND DE  BOYS ARE PLAYING EL RESTO ME PARES QUE ESTAS BIEN

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  • mo0on
    Mochapoints: 5623  |  Teacher Score: 238 (0%)

    there is a fat women in the mole

    the man how i meet is very tool

    the girl play with it doll

    the boy is short and fat

    i hope speak japanese some day

     

    Submitted over a year ago
  • Canal
    Mochapoints: 5679  |  Teacher Score: 1469 (100%)
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  • gnsokt
    Mochapoints: 108  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    The women gets up at seven o'clock, the man has breakfest at eight o'clock.The gırl went to the school at eight tirty the boy will go to mach at two o'clock and I will be with him and you too.

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  • mahmoudafs
    Mochapoints: 108  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    the old man are reading a book at nine o'clock and fat woman are cookind at ten o'clock .I am studing english at sixteen ten . the girl are runing in the park at seventeen and the boys are playing in the street at twele o'clock

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  • Miriam
    Mochapoints: 15690  |  Teacher Score: 5655 (100%)

    I'am in the park with my dog at eleven o' clock and you're watching tv at ten o'clock.There are many people in the restaurant today.at twelve o' clock A woman is reading a pink romance book at half past five. A man is sawing his daughter at four fifteen. The girls is speaking about love problems at eight o'clock and the boys are playing on playstation platform at ten o'clock p.m.

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  • Lia Loengrin
    Mochapoints: 102  |  Teacher Score:(0%)
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  • zahra
    Mochapoints: 110  |  Teacher Score: 10 (0%)

     At the morning , perhaps at 8:23, when i was going to my university, i saw a poor woman that need to  little money to provide  food for little girl . the girl was look like my doughter And need  to all  things that every child  need. Then she cried for a little happiness.

    There is a man in my sity that dose not  have any sad matter in his life, some peaple named him The Mad.

    My girl is going to kindergarden at 13 O'clock .When the BOys are going to their school at 12:30.

     

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  • kelly
    Mochapoints: 113  |  Teacher Score: 10 (0%)

    i'm kelly, yesterday i saw a women fall in a faint in elevator, a boy came to help her to call an ambulance, a girl help her embrocate,  soon after a man promptly carry a women up an ambulance.

    Submitted over a year ago
  • saba
    Mochapoints: 14483  |  Teacher Score: 837 (100%)

    The sixty year old man is crossing the road at ten o 'clock with his dog. Ninty year old his mother is neating sweater at  eleven o clock. The girl is going to night school at sixteen o' clock and boy is singing a song at seventeen o clock. You are going to railway station at seventeen thirty and I am started to reading  at sixteen thirty.

     

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  • claire
    Mochapoints: 143  |  Teacher Score: 14 (0%)

    a woman is cooking at seven o'clock,and I plan to help her, the boys and the girls are playing games with a man,and I am wandering what am you doing now.

    Submitted over a year ago
  • Sara
    Mochapoints: 1107  |  Teacher Score: 114

    The old men are walking at seven o'clock and the fat women are cooking at eleven fifteen. I will run in the park at four o'clock and you are studying at the school at seven ten. The girls are studying in the living room at twelve o'clock and de boys are playing with ball in the street at ten thirty.

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  • renyuan19810121
    Mochapoints: 108  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    The old women are walking at seven o'clock and the fat men are cooking at eleven fifteen. I will run in the park at sixteen o'clock and you are studing in the school at nineteen ten. The girls are studing in the living room at twelve o'clock and de boys are playing with ball in the street at ten thirty.

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  • fisher
    Mochapoints: 346  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    11:15, 7, 12, 10:30, 19, 16.

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  • hosam
    Mochapoints: 265  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    yesterday my favourite fotball team was playing at five o'clock. the players where playing well and they wined 2-0

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  • joyce
    Mochapoints: 110  |  Teacher Score: 10 (0%)

    hi!

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  • zari.masa
    Mochapoints: 2643  |  Teacher Score: 21 (0%)

    ich will detschland lernen

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  • raluca_farde
    Mochapoints: 261  |  Teacher Score: 16 (0%)

    nu stiu

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  • abbas
    Mochapoints: 3981  |  Teacher Score: 224 (0%)

    Hi ,I am abbas.I from iran.

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  • osama khaled mo...
    Mochapoints: 604  |  Teacher Score: 18 (0%)

    the boy go to school and a girl studing in the living room  and  de boys are palying with football in the street at the city

    you look at very nice comment and my opinion in the course studing the very best web sites and desigen or the ideas for the web sites

     

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  • mohammadcanada
    Mochapoints: 108  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    hello . i am mohammad .25 years old . i want .....

     

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  • aliardawi
    Mochapoints: 163  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    i am ali ardawi, in 1976 grauated for univesity of triploi-libya as a chemical engineer.

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  • mahsa
    Mochapoints: 889  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    hello i am lerning english please helpe me

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  • 王静
    Mochapoints: 3022  |  Teacher Score: 118 (0%)
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  • Mical Siqueira
    Mochapoints: 516  |  Teacher Score: 90

    A woman eat  apple at eight o'clock,

     The Man  read magazine at seven o'clock,

    The girls reading a book at  nine o'clock,

    A boy play soccer at four o'clock (pm),

    And I study at home at ten o'clock.

     

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  • Katy
    Mochapoints: 6403  |  Teacher Score: 562 (0%)

    the old men are walking at seven o clock and the fat women are cooking at  eleven fifteen . I will run in the  park at sixteen  o`clock  and you are  studing in the school at nineteen  ten . the girls are studing  in the living room  at twelve o clock and the boys are playing wiht ball in the strret at ten thirty.

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  • ibrahim
    Mochapoints: 8050  |  Teacher Score: 104 (0%)

    the old men are walking at seven o 'clock,te fat omwn are cooking at eleven.i will run in the park at six o'clock,you are studying in the school at ten.the girs are studying in the living room at twelve o'oclock,the boys are playing with ball in the street at ten.

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

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  • tezcan
    Mochapoints: 108  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    hiiiii

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  • imranhs
    Mochapoints: 111  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    i love you

    Submitted over a year ago
  • bojan
    Mochapoints: 558  |  Teacher Score: 31 (0%)

    the old man walking at seven o'clock.

    the fat woman cooking at eleven o'clock.

    i'm studing in the school at nineteen ten

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  • gpraveen
    Mochapoints: 1168  |  Teacher Score: 119 (100%)

    Young boys are taking breakfast.I am busy in writing.Girls are talking incredibly.women will cook chicken for dinner.Cattle sounds are very noisy .Little babies are fast asleep

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  • pana
    Mochapoints: 108  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    I'm cooking at seven o'clock and my mom is open the store at seven thirty .We have some breakfast at eight o'clock together and my sister go to work at same time. I will go to supermarket at fourteen and I will come home at sixteen for look the serie.

     

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  • sun xin
    Mochapoints: 108  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    los hombres viejos estan caminando a las siete en punto y la mujer gorda esta cocinado a las once y 15. yo fui a correr en el parque a las seis en punto y estudio en el colegio a las nueve y diez.las niñas estan estudiando en la sala a lasdce y lo niños estan jugando con la pelota  calle a las diez y media

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  • carmen
    Mochapoints: 598  |  Teacher Score: 56 (0%)

    seven 0'clock eleven fiifteen sixteen o'clock nineteen ten twelve o'clock.

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  • carmen
    Mochapoints: 598  |  Teacher Score: 56 (0%)

    woman are cooking at eleven fifiteen. a man are walking at seven o'clock. the boy is playing at ten thirty, me i'am learnin english at eight fourty three.

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  • sweta
    Mochapoints: 108  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    i think, the old men are reading newspaper in his house at twelve o'clock, their wifes are walking in the garden from ten o'clock to one o'clock. Beside that men and women are working in their office, and the children are in the school. In the evening, they have a dinner at 7 o'clock, then they talk about a day until nine o'clock. May be after dinner children are doing their homework. So, they watch TV until their sleeptime, and finally that all go to the bed..

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  • benyamin
    Mochapoints: 116  |  Teacher Score: 16 (0%)

    hello

    Submitted over a year ago
  • benyamin
    Mochapoints: 116  |  Teacher Score: 16 (0%)

    hello i wanna lean german languig help me pleas

     

    Submitted over a year ago
  • 阿板
    Mochapoints: 444  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    A woman usually cook at half past six ,  her hunsband get up at seven oclock .their dought and son go to school at seven thirty .you are looking my composition . haha ! but I usually sleep until ten . 

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  • celal demir
    Mochapoints: 303  |  Teacher Score: 192 (0%)
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  • donia nasr
    Mochapoints: 1585  |  Teacher Score: 18 (0%)

    hello every body iam donia nasr iam an egyptian girl i speak english and iam learning italian and really i want help from any italian girl plz help me to improve my italian plzzzzz

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  • Kenan-01
    Mochapoints: 812  |  Teacher Score: 667 (0%)

    when you define the time like ten thirty- you can use half past ten or ten past seven

    regards and thanks

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  • chauthanhbinh
    Mochapoints: 195  |  Teacher Score: 60 (0%)

    He is rearing a pair of glasses. He is standing in front of the garden. It is bright. The garden have a lot of trees.

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  • aylinnn01
    Mochapoints: 128  |  Teacher Score: 28 (0%)

    I saw a man yesterday.The man was like a woman.he was running very fast to hospital,i think the time was 7 oclock.. at that time I and my friends (Linda and Sam) were speaking in a noisy way..A old but too elegant woman was looking us very nervously..we decided that we would meet at 10 pm for going concert...because the concert would begin at 11 pm..

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  • chauthanhbinh
    Mochapoints: 195  |  Teacher Score: 60 (0%)

    Today was the bad day for me, i met a lot of hardships, i have tryed very much but everything was almost happened inverse in my mine. Now, i am standing a big chance, but i am affraid that i cant do everything well. I hope that it is bright next day.

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  • lyly
    Mochapoints: 108  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    a man go down for to go in the kitchen at 6 o'clock the woman arrive at 8 o'clock for the job the boy and the girl going to at school at 9 o'clock you are walking in the park aT 18 o'clock and i sleeping now

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  • siledube
    Mochapoints: 108  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    Man, it´s a text full of mistakes. What´d you expect me to do?

     

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  • Teresa Maturana
    Mochapoints: 20424  |  Teacher Score: 1613 (95%)

    The exercise is very well. Continue your practice.

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  • linhlinh
    Mochapoints: 277  |  Teacher Score: 12 (0%)

    Today is my normal day. There is no special thing. I went to the national library by bus in the morning.Then I came back my university at 3.15 p.m. 

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  • rahel lemma
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  • fatto
    Mochapoints: 210  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    it was 9am when i waked up yesterday,i saw my father at 1 after noon . My mother went to visit anighbour at 4pm her childe go to sleep at 10 pm and her husband come to home at11pm she prepare the diner at12am

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  • Ereen
    Mochapoints: 113  |  Teacher Score: 10 (0%)

    Iam Ereen shoukry i work pattern maker i want to leran english

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  • hani
    Mochapoints: 126  |  Teacher Score: 10 (0%)

    sd

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  • marmar
    Mochapoints: 6049  |  Teacher Score: 146 (0%)

    very good............

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  • Gumersindo
    Mochapoints: 2239  |  Teacher Score: 158 (0%)
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    Mochapoints: 108  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    buraya

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  • 小阿回家
    Mochapoints: 239  |  Teacher Score: 10 (0%)

    how  to learn  Engilsh well?  I'm  a    Chinese    student?

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    Você escreve bem, continue assim.

     

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  • ნინო წივწივაძე
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    take my advise and look through the grammcompanions,that will be good for your english grammar

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  • Tatiany
    Mochapoints: 2053  |  Teacher Score: 220 (0%)

    Axistem algumas pequenas correções a serem feitas que já foram sugeridas pela instrutora. Mas você escreve bem. Continue praticando!

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  • sadaf
    Mochapoints: 2287  |  Teacher Score: 194

    The old man was sleeping at eleven o' clock and the woman was washing utensiles. The young girl was watching movie on television at ten o' clock. The stupid boy was distorying plants.You and me will meet on two o' clock. 

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  • hesha
    Mochapoints: 108  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    am hisham from saudi areba from jeddah

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    Mochapoints: 704  |  Teacher Score: 116 (0%)

    Good..keep it up..

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    Mochapoints: 1222  |  Teacher Score: 48 (0%)

        One of may good habits first i like to help my children in their homework. Secondry i reach all my family on time . Thaird i have abig smile to all people i now . Finally i am avolaunteer i can help every one without asking.

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  • Abel
    Mochapoints: 10214  |  Teacher Score: 7485 (100%)

    The girls are studing...studying

    de boys...the not de

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    Mochapoints: 539  |  Teacher Score: 10 (0%)

    i want learn English

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  • jinlin10
    Mochapoints: 108  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    uma mulher - 11:10; um hmem - 07:00; uma garota - 12:00; um garoto - 10:30; você - 19:10 and eu - 16:00.

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  • Tábata
    Mochapoints: 10017  |  Teacher Score: 2724 (81%)

    I will run in the park at 4 p.m.

    You are at school at 7:10 p.m.

    on the street

     

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  • Lindemberg
    Mochapoints: 108  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    o homem velho está falando as sete horas e o homem gordo

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  • Elena
    Mochapoints: 11456  |  Teacher Score: 977 (100%)

    Старики идут ... Куда?

    баллотироваться в парке??

    в девятнадцать лет десять .,????

    де-мальчики ???:-))))

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  • visheshta
    Mochapoints: 118  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    hi, how r u?

    i want to speak english with fluency

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  • jihad
    Mochapoints: 320  |  Teacher Score: 10 (0%)

    i am looking to someone to speake with me, so i want someone to improve this language

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  • walter almeida
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    As 7:00 hrs. da noite

     

     

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  • mimon266
    Mochapoints: 108  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    hihi

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  • javid
    Mochapoints: 120  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    the old man is reading the book  in the garden and the woman is talking in the phone with her doughter and the yong is uning around the garden with his dog. the girl is study story book in her room. and yong man is working with computer and yong is watching TV for the cooking program 

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  • dmac
    Mochapoints: 4013  |  Teacher Score: 652 (100%)

    The old men are walking at seven o'clock (7am or 7pm?) and the fat women are cooking at eleven fifteen (11.15am or pm).

    I will run in the park at sixteen o'clock (we don't say 16 o'clock - four o'clock - 4pm) and you are studing studying in the at school at nineteen ten. (7.10pm) or (10 mins past 7).

    The girls are studing studying in the living room at twelve o'clock (12pm) and de the boys are playing with or the ball in the street at ten thirty (10.30pm or am).

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  • danehoover
    Mochapoints: 110  |  Teacher Score: 10 (0%)

    Good job marco!  It's funny and correct english not bad.

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    Mochapoints: 113  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    hi your english is very well

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  • gofoitgal
    Mochapoints: 110  |  Teacher Score: 10 (0%)

    not bad

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  • ahmed salman
    Mochapoints: 108  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    hi my name is ahmed iam from iraq iam 19 years old i love traveling and sports

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  • yessine
    Mochapoints: 108  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    salut

     

     

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  • Filipe
    Mochapoints: 1088  |  Teacher Score: 98 (0%)

    Eu acho q seria melhor se você ultilizasse o Simple Present:

    "The old men walk at seven o' clock and the fat women cook at eleven fifteen..."

    E cuidado, no gerundio não há regras com relação a terminações com y... é só adicionar o ing. ex: to study- Studying; to play- playing

     

     

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  • Carlos Palmejar
    Mochapoints: 5646  |  Teacher Score: 842 (0%)

    When you use are walking or are studying (as in your sentences) ,it means that the action is going on (in the present).but if you imply that an action is repeated at a specific time, write used to or you can use the simple present tense as walk and study. Use the boys instead of de boys, studying instead studing ( not intended, of course).Otherwise, your style is just fine.

     

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  • aysun
    Mochapoints: 792  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    The fat women knitting at nine o'clock. The tall man running on the road at six o'clock. Iam going  to school tomorrow at two fifteen. You are working in a hotel as a receptionist.The boys are listening to music at twelve o'clock. The girls are playing voleyball at three twenty at the school.

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  • janki
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  • darsh_191
    Mochapoints: 2082  |  Teacher Score: 110 (0%)

    WELL DONE

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  • Ricardo da Silv...
    Mochapoints: 1330  |  Teacher Score: 162

    Os velhos Estarão de pé como sete horas e as mulheres gordas Estarão cozinhando como Onze e quinze horas. Vou correr como nenhuma dezesses Parque horas e você estará na escola como dez e dezenove. As meninas vão jogar bola na rua, como dez e meia. 

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  • vilasini
    Mochapoints: 2220  |  Teacher Score: 66 (0%)

    yes i needed detailed notes send to my email.

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  • baloopatel
    Mochapoints: 108  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    the old men are walking at seven o,clock and th efat women are cooking at eleven fifteen. i will run in the park at sixteen o'clock and oyu are stugding in the school at ten nineteen.the girl are studing in the living room at twelve o'clock and the boys are playing with ball in the street at ten thirty.

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  • huntur77
    Mochapoints: 1591  |  Teacher Score: 81 (0%)

    hello They were walking on this street, somebody is hungry, l will vizit her mother, dont cry today

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  • jane
    Mochapoints: 3017  |  Teacher Score: 243
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  • karla Andréa
    Mochapoints: 2203  |  Teacher Score: 534

    THAT'S RIGHT!!!

    KISSES...

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  • karla Andréa
    Mochapoints: 2203  |  Teacher Score: 534

    GOOD!!!!!

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  • ahmedamar
    Mochapoints: 1912  |  Teacher Score: 308 (0%)

    The old men are walking at seven o'clock and the fat women are cooking at eleven fifteen. I will run in the park at sixteen o'clock and you are studing in the school at nineteen ten. The girls are studing in the living room at twelve o'clock and de boys are playing with ball in the street at ten thirty.

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  • nana
    Mochapoints: 3432  |  Teacher Score: 45 (0%)

    the old men are walking at seven o'clock and the fat women are cooking at eleven fifteen . I will run in the park at sixteen o'clock and you are studing in the school at nineteen ten. The girls are studing in the living room at twelve o'clock and de boys are playing with ball  in the street at ten thirty.

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  • joel Antonio sa...
    Mochapoints: 3418  |  Teacher Score: 794

    A VERY GOOD  WORK !

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  • nemo.nini
    Mochapoints: 2005  |  Teacher Score: 569 (0%)

    nice

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    The old man are walking at seven o'clock and the fat woman are cooking at eleven fifteen > i will run in the park at sixteen o;clock and you are studing in the school at nineteen ten . the girls are studing in the living room at twelve o'clock and de boys are playing with ball in the street at ten thirty .

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  • Yaser
    Mochapoints: 8450  |  Teacher Score: 2189 (100%)

    and the boys

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  • Eddie
    Mochapoints: 311  |  Teacher Score: 84 (0%)

    In normal converstation (at least in the US) we use a 12 hour clock. Ex.-16 o'clock is concidered 4 o'clock. The last sentence should use "the" instead of "de" and there needs to be an "a" before the word "ball".

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    sehr gut

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  • Edilza Souza
    Mochapoints: 147  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    Não consigo formar uma frase, pois não sei colocar os verbos certos.

    O que devo fazer pra aprender?

     

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  • sonu
    Mochapoints: 863  |  Teacher Score: 10 (0%)

    The old man are walking at seven o'clock

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  • shireen
    Mochapoints: 2905  |  Teacher Score: 994 (89%)

    The old men are (is)walking at seven o'clock and the fat women are (is) cooking at eleven fifteen.

    The girls are (is) studing in the living room at twelve o'clock and de (the) boys are (is) playing with ball

     

    is goes with she/ he/ it

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  • Ton
    Mochapoints: 11281  |  Teacher Score: 830 (94%)

    ARE YOU BRASILIAN? Y0U`RE SPEAKING VERY GOOD.

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    Mochapoints: 5394  |  Teacher Score: 304 (0%)

    The girls are studing in the living room at twelve o'clock and de the boys are playing with ball in the street at ten thirty.

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  • Annie81
    Mochapoints: 2589  |  Teacher Score: 248 (0%)
    The young girl was going at school al eight fifteen when the the old men was still sleeping. The boy was listening music at three o' clock. The nice women was cooking for her family at twelve o' clock. I was studying English at eleven thirteen instead you was reading at five thirteen.
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  • fatma hashim
    Mochapoints: 522  |  Teacher Score: 20 (0%)

    good job

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  • Павел
    Mochapoints: 2899  |  Teacher Score: 177

    не мой язык

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  • Павел
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    не мой язык

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    Mochapoints: 409  |  Teacher Score: 84 (0%)

    Your grammer is correct but you are confused between the 12 hour clock and the 24 hour clock. Generally the 24 hour clock ytime is not used except in the military or Medicine etc. So for 1600 we say 4pm and for 1910 we say 7.10pm. Otherwise well done!  

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    now

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    Mochapoints: 4019  |  Teacher Score: 2554

    studying

    the boys

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  • Linda
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    Hello Marco, An excellent effort on what is always a difficult subject, time.

    While it's ok to say seven o'clock, its not ok to say sixteen o'clock. Say sixteen hours or four o'clock.

    Your other times are fine.

    However, if you say you WILL RUN at four o'clock, you need to say you WILL STUDY at nineteen ten.

    Also remember that it is STUDYING (not studing).

    NEVER DE but always THE (watch out the boys not de boys)

     

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  • raghad
    Mochapoints: 4846  |  Teacher Score: 60 (0%)

    while I walking  I met a man he was tall.He was not short and he was poor.He was not rich .His brother was not tall.He was short. and his son was fat.He was not thin and they were kind, they were not cruel.

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  • Daniel Young
    Mochapoints: 360  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    the girls reading at nith o'clock,boys game in half seven o'clock.

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  • Teacher 布鲁诺。
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    The old men are walking at seven o'clock and the fat women are cooking at eleven and fifteen. I will be running in the park at sixteen o'clock and you will be studying in the school at seven and ten p.m. The girls are studying in the living room at twelve o'clock and the boys are playing with a ball in the street at ten thirty.

    get in touch in  bruno.mhalrait (skype) for both pronunciation training.

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    Mochapoints: 17206  |  Teacher Score: 229 (0%)

    ****gooooooooooood****

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  • paulo.salaro
    Mochapoints: 16614  |  Teacher Score: 9985 (96%)

    Good job.

    I agree with Sally Moore.

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    Mochapoints: 3239  |  Teacher Score: 18 (0%)

    the ritch woman is buing at tow fiftheen, and the old man is runing at eleven thirteen.The girl is stading the egsam aquarter tow ,and the boy is playing a footboll a ten thirty.I will reading abook at six o'clock and you are eating nine fifteen.   

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  • kecia
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  • Vesna Babic
    Mochapoints: 11327  |  Teacher Score: 2622 (0%)

    I will run... Not sixteen, but 4 PM.

    Not nineteen , but 7 PM (if you think in the eveening).

    Well, Sally Moore already corect your exercizes.

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  • prettycat
    Mochapoints: 648  |  Teacher Score: 16 (0%)

    The old men are walking at seven o'clock and the fat women are cooking at eleven fifteen. I will run in the park at sixteen o'clock and you are studing in the school at nineteen. The girls are studing in the living room at twelve o'clock and de boys are playing with ball in the street at ten thirty.

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  • Angelika
    Mochapoints: 1731  |  Teacher Score: 114 (0%)

    the old man is...

    the fat woman is

    you are studying

    the boys

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  • lama
    Mochapoints: 2816  |  Teacher Score: 10 (0%)

    AMALSUSA

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    Mochapoints: 9221  |  Teacher Score: 1293 (95%)

    It  s  a very good  exercise .Go  on  with  your  written exercises

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    Mochapoints: 9221  |  Teacher Score: 1293 (95%)

    This  is  a  very  good  exercise  for  your  learning. Go  on  in  that  way.Congratulations.

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  • douglas
    Mochapoints: 150  |  Teacher Score: 10 (0%)

    the correct word is "studying", and "the" and not "de" boys. Also, there should be an "a" or "the" before ball. You could also say "playing ball"

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    Mochapoints: 1285  |  Teacher Score: 96 (0%)

    hello all

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