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At the park.
Describe what you do at the park. Do you play sports? Do you read?
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erienglish
erienglish
When I go to the park I like to ride bike and play with my nephews and nieces. I like football, but I can't practice it, I prefer to watch it on t.v.
Submitted: 2008-05-30 08:10:17
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Very good !
Terrific as usual. Just a few comments for overall clarity.
When I go to the park I like to ride my bike and play...I like football, but I can't play it . So I prefer to watch it on TV. (has a more natural sound).
As you probably know "practicar" has a slightly different meaning from "practice" i.e. Que' deporte practicas?
What sport do you play? Whereas we practice football in order to play better."I can't play it "implies that you don't do it very well (or maybe you are injured). By the way Netherlands vs. Russia is on TV today--Euro 2008.
I hope the suggestions are useful.
Que tenga un buen fin de semana.
Ricardo
keeep practice darling:)